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Published: 2008-12-04 07:02:17 +0000 UTC; Views: 159; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 0
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Sitting in the shadowsListening to the night.
An Eire melancholy melody
Who's sorrow fills the night.
The song invokes a memory,
With it's mournful tune.
Sweet memories of friendship
tinged with the sorrow
of one gone to soon.
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Sorry for your loss Babe. I know its too late but i think she'd love it.
only suggestion I could make is that instead of the second night - you consider changing it to dark. it would flow better.
but it is sweet and moving no matter what.
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i know hon we have many many things to do in a day and some times before we know it months and years have past and those that we were so close to have moved on leaving a void in our lives. i'll think about the change you suggest after i get some sleep
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