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Published: 2007-11-15 22:12:26 +0000 UTC; Views: 87; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 0
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snow snowlet it snow all around
flake and fall
to the ground
flowers of ice
blossoms all around
the blanket falls
with nary a sound
a beauty so pure
yet also so cold
to bring memories of youth
now that we have grown old
come sit by the hearth
come here my tell
for i remember when i was young
and when the snow fell
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That's great, the imagery is excellent! I felt like I was sitting with you on the floor by the fire like a child getting read a story
And "nary" was very nice word choice
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Thank you. that's actually the effect i was going for. to old friends talking about the past or a grandparent telling there grand children about when there were young. more towards the latter i think. also i have an fondness for old English that am at a loss to explain
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You're getting much better.
I like it very much. Poetry about that cold that makes one feel warm indeed. The imagery is very nice, and snow is one of my favorite things, despite my living in a warm climate.
Very nice, good sir.
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thank you. it's nice to know what people think about my work as it help me grow as an artist.
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