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I've read some comments about her anatomy, I will say only two things, first this is a cartoon not a photorealistic drawing and secondly the angle of the photo that she has taken is "strange". Please search similar real photos from women making "sexting" in their bathrooms, you will see their anatomy, bigger hands-smaller waist.However, thank you all for you comments I really appreciate that you give me your time to write your critiques.
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kimikimochi In reply to ??? [2013-01-30 06:04:47 +0000 UTC]
Well, the coloring is certainly very nice and overall your skills are up there with a professional comic book artist. However, her proportions are insanely unrealistic. She looks like she should topple over from the size of her breasts and her minuscule waist. The way she's posing also makes it look like she's purposefully contorting in the most uncomfortable way possible. Plus, the thickness of her arm is almost equal to that of her thighs. Even Jessica Rabbit would double take at a woman like this.
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slingbees [2013-01-30 04:53:02 +0000 UTC]
Even if we're talking about more cartoonish anatomy, this is a little strange looking...
Her arms are too long, and where the arm folds, it looks like there's another something between her forearm and upper arm. The line is a bit too thick there. It might help to try making it just shading instead of a solid line, so it doesn't look like a separate fold. Her upper arm looks like it might be longer than her forearm. If she held her arms straight at her side, her elbow ought to line up with her bellybutton, but it would fall past it. Her fingers are also too long.
I know her breasts are supposed to be large, but there's too much space between where her neck and her breasts where her collarbones are. Breasts also don't perk up that much without some kind of support, but judging by how easily her nipple and areola are showing through her shirt, she's definitely not wearing one.
And I'm not saying I can do any better, certainly, but I can see what's wrong here. Your anatomy isn't even that bad at all (I know the point is to emphasize her assets, so I'm not going to complain about that), but there are a few proportional errors regarding her limbs that could probably use touching up. Though her fingers are too long, they're still better than the hands I draw, for sure.
However, I really like the coloring and shading. You seem to have a good grasp of reflections and light sources. I also love her hair, her eyes, and the folds in her clothing. The color scheme seems well thought out, and it has a warm feel to it I like.
I also think it's kind of funny, you'd think of girls taking selfies in their bathrooms and it sounds pretty unappealing, but I never would have thought to draw a girl taking a selfie. It has an original feel to it, though I know you've done it once before.
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Thetigi In reply to ??? [2013-01-30 04:42:19 +0000 UTC]
Hate to troll, but the majority if people that do 'sexting' usually end up dying from suicide due to bullying.
It's gonna suck big time if someone else ends up with it...
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krisjustus In reply to Thetigi [2013-01-30 05:13:06 +0000 UTC]
I'm sorry, but you do realize that adults "do sexting," too? You know what it's called when you're on a long business trip, maybe you're deployed overseas with the military, and you send your significant other a sexy picture via your phone or the internet? It's sexting. Most adults who do this aren't at risk of being bullied to death. Guess what? Most teens who do it aren't either. Bullying and suicide are terrible, but it's not sexting that causes it. Don't be so ignorant.
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opinions In reply to Thetigi [2013-01-30 05:12:33 +0000 UTC]
Could you actually imagine if the majority of people that quote sexted unquote, committed suicide? There would be so many dead people. Especially people 40 years or older, since, according to CNN, they do it the most.
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sweetmuffins1988 [2013-01-30 04:24:04 +0000 UTC]
Your an amazing artist. Definitely gonna add you to the watch list
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Distraction-Number-4 [2013-01-30 04:20:24 +0000 UTC]
Just out of curiosity, where do all her entrails fit? Because I'm pretty sure it's not in her waist. . .
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rmhill10 In reply to Distraction-Number-4 [2013-01-30 05:20:58 +0000 UTC]
I think they're all in her big jugs
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Distraction-Number-4 In reply to rmhill10 [2013-01-30 05:42:20 +0000 UTC]
HAHA, yeah. Poor thing, that must be painful. *shakes head*
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Jararie In reply to CaptainRicco [2013-01-30 04:26:59 +0000 UTC]
I was bam! Then I read your comment and now I can't stop looking at the hands lol!
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RogueWriter3201 [2013-01-30 01:44:28 +0000 UTC]
One of the greatest achievements in the use of modern technology...
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darkludovic [2013-01-30 01:30:30 +0000 UTC]
It is you who draw?? It's great job, congratulations
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MerryMisery [2013-01-30 00:58:24 +0000 UTC]
i don't give a damn what people say... sexting is my guilty pleasure
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