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allestudios [2013-12-31 22:16:21 +0000 UTC]

Overall

Vision

Originality

Technique

Impact

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Vision:

For Vision I gave you 3 stars because the horse doesn't really have the right "lighting" a horse jumping over fire would, maybe add some orangish overlay layer around the tummy?

Originality:

For originality I gave you 5 stars because this is something really out of the box that I have never seen.

Technique:

For technique I gave you 2.5 stars because the mane and tail are brown when it is obviously a bay horse. And another tip for the mane, I use a Hard (.3) Brush with the size at .4 to make the shape then I go down to around.16 for the flyaways, I only and saying this because the mane doesn't look very full.

Impact:

For impact I gave you 4.5 because this is a very good overall peice and it really catches the eye.


Ps, If this is a layout order, maybe try and add a quote or something?

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