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allestudios [2013-12-31 22:16:21 +0000 UTC]
Overall
Vision
Originality
Technique
Impact
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Vision:
For Vision I gave you 3 stars because the horse doesn't really have the right "lighting" a horse jumping over fire would, maybe add some orangish overlay layer around the tummy?
Originality:
For originality I gave you 5 stars because this is something really out of the box that I have never seen.
Technique:
For technique I gave you 2.5 stars because the mane and tail are brown when it is obviously a bay horse. And another tip for the mane, I use a Hard (.3) Brush with the size at .4 to make the shape then I go down to around.16 for the flyaways, I only and saying this because the mane doesn't look very full.
Impact:
For impact I gave you 4.5 because this is a very good overall peice and it really catches the eye.
Ps, If this is a layout order, maybe try and add a quote or something?
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elixir-studios In reply to allestudios [2014-01-01 00:58:37 +0000 UTC]
2 things one...I can not critique your work like line arts cause they are too good *puts hands up in surrender TRUE and second thanks for the critique
I tried to do the orange on the stomach but I stink at lighting so you can barely see it xD And yeah about the mane I felt the same way
As for the quote I probably will add one when I have you code it xD I need to hire you for this xD or find a way to get codes to people that have nothing to do with email and spares. ANYWHO thanks for critique
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allestudios In reply to elixir-studios [2014-01-01 01:16:15 +0000 UTC]
hm okai xDΒ
you're welcome!!!!
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elixir-studios In reply to allestudios [2014-01-01 01:24:51 +0000 UTC]
xD that is a funny face xD
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