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elixirphoenix — A Better Day
Published: 2007-07-28 17:32:14 +0000 UTC; Views: 57; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 0
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Description Is blood so gruesome
As it flows down your hand
Why does it strike fear
As you stare down at me
To me it is a release
I can't get enough
If you had another answer
Another way
I'd gladly obey
But you remain silent
I feel I can't change
So I will stay here
Watching the blood go down
Wishing for a better day
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Comments: 5

xRichyx [2007-07-29 01:02:00 +0000 UTC]

Emo does stand for emotional, I guess everyone is emotional at times. I think you might be going through a phase, I went through an emo phase for about a week. Anyways, again nice poem.

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elixirphoenix In reply to xRichyx [2007-07-29 02:50:52 +0000 UTC]

Thanks
I have clinical depression so it's not really a phase...it's just sometimes it's worse than others.

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spork18 [2007-07-28 21:29:12 +0000 UTC]

*sniff sniff*
Emo pain D;
But anyways, good description.. .but I just can't see you being emo! >.<

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elixirphoenix In reply to spork18 [2007-07-28 22:26:37 +0000 UTC]

Ethan says I listen to emo musicO.O

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spork18 In reply to elixirphoenix [2007-07-29 00:30:09 +0000 UTC]

No you listen to oldies and opera and baaaad technopoppy music

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