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Published: 2008-04-12 20:21:14 +0000 UTC; Views: 82; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 0
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Description Anyone can betray you
Even your closet friend
Anyone can betray you
I know you won't believe me that
Anyone can betray you
You still watch the sunsets
On the beach
You still let the ocean air
Bring joy to your nostrils
Your hair blows in the wind
But
Anyone can betray you
That season hasn't yet come
For you
Stay at this peaceful moment
Let the heartbreaks
Never come to you
So that you will never
Truly believe that
Anyone can betray you
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Comments: 12

youneverasked [2008-04-15 01:19:53 +0000 UTC]

I suppose there are always other people going through it somewhere.
I don't know why I thought it wouldn't happen to me. Kinda stupid, now that I think about it.

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elixirphoenix In reply to youneverasked [2008-04-15 01:42:05 +0000 UTC]

Not really stupid. Just a "it only happens to other people" thing. You weren't prepared for it.

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GrandLordAtos [2008-04-13 02:52:23 +0000 UTC]

This was exactly what I felt last week...DAMN! Why is it that good people are hurt so badly by betrayal?!? Is it because we actually care? Do the traitors think of it as funny? Do they have regrets? Or in order to avoid their own self-loathing, do they deny they did anything wrong at all and blame the trusting nature of open hearted people?!? Gah!

Sorry about that, but it's really how I felt last week, and I have a feeling it's not far from what you're feeling. If you want to talk about it, I'm here, and I feel the pain of treachery. Oh, and sorry I haven't been commenting on your works a lot. It's been tough to manage my time at all anymore, and to give proper critique or have an orderly opinion, I require time and the right mood. V_V

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elixirphoenix In reply to GrandLordAtos [2008-04-13 03:23:31 +0000 UTC]

*huggles*
Understood
I didn't write for maybe a week (for fun) because of what happened. So if something bad happened to you, you have the right to calm down as you choose (unless it harms someone).

And why are good people hurt...I don't know. If you care about something you'll be affected emotionally by what happens.

Thanks

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GrandLordAtos In reply to elixirphoenix [2008-04-13 03:28:08 +0000 UTC]

It's terrible also how sometimes those who are in on deception think the one who executed it did nothing wrong, and pursue and ridicule the one who suffers.

That's been happening to me as of late. I feel as though I'm never going to break free of the shame I felt, or from the people who keep bringing the shame back.

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elixirphoenix In reply to GrandLordAtos [2008-04-13 03:31:22 +0000 UTC]

I'm sure you'll get out of this night
Though it's horrible that there is pain. Sometimes people fear things and it makes them act irrational.

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Herbgurl [2008-04-12 20:25:50 +0000 UTC]

Nice work!!

I hope you are doing alright!

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elixirphoenix In reply to Herbgurl [2008-04-12 20:32:33 +0000 UTC]

*huggles*
I'm doing okay. I'm normally distractable as I try to write two outlines today. One is for a paper that is going to be 12-15 pages long and the other one is for a short paper that is 6-7 pages long.

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Herbgurl In reply to elixirphoenix [2008-04-13 01:09:39 +0000 UTC]

At least you can keep yourself busy!! Glad to hear you're doing alright!

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emokid07 [2008-04-12 20:22:43 +0000 UTC]

I really like this! Nice Job and keep up the great work!

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elixirphoenix In reply to emokid07 [2008-04-12 20:31:29 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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emokid07 In reply to elixirphoenix [2008-04-13 03:11:22 +0000 UTC]

You are very welcome!

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