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elixirphoenix — Before I Die
Published: 2007-10-26 18:51:17 +0000 UTC; Views: 70; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 1
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Description There she stands
Smiling at me
Me withered hand reaches out to her
Comfort is drawn from her presence
As me loyalty was in life
So it will be in death
With her, I am saved
With her, I will win against death
Now me eyes shut slowly
Her visage in me mind
Darkness soon envelopes me
Finally there are the gates
And Mary is there waiting
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Comments: 11

Romi-xoxo [2007-10-27 17:59:24 +0000 UTC]

i like it, very espiritual, I am afraid of death as well. Always have been, i rememebr crying at night as a little girl thinking abou tit.

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elixirphoenix In reply to Romi-xoxo [2007-10-27 20:21:12 +0000 UTC]

*huggles*
I remember I used to be afraid of death.

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Juxtaposition22 [2007-10-26 22:04:16 +0000 UTC]

Is this too strange a moment to mention that my real first name is Mary??? LOL

I'm extrodinarily irreligious, so this one doesn't speak to me as much as most of your poetry does. I like that you are such a prolific creator though, keep publishing

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elixirphoenix In reply to Juxtaposition22 [2007-10-26 22:18:25 +0000 UTC]

Thanks
That is weirdO.o

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xRichyx [2007-10-26 20:42:46 +0000 UTC]

That is really spiritual, but it sends chills up my spine....

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elixirphoenix In reply to xRichyx [2007-10-26 21:19:17 +0000 UTC]

Why does it send chills up your spine?

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xRichyx In reply to elixirphoenix [2007-10-27 03:07:36 +0000 UTC]

I have a fear of death. Well.....yea I do. Just thinking of it freaks me out, I have so many questions about the after life.....oh gee I'm getting a headache from thinking of it right now....

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elixirphoenix In reply to xRichyx [2007-10-27 03:11:32 +0000 UTC]

*huggles*
I just think of death as a fact of life. I'm determined to live me life without fear of being judged in the afterlife. I know it's better to follow me heart than to follow people without thinking. I still believe in God, but it's the thing of blindly following without questioning that worries me.

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xRichyx In reply to elixirphoenix [2007-10-27 03:25:01 +0000 UTC]

That's what worries me. I mean I believe in God and Heaven. But you know I think of the fact, is that true or not? i trust, but I'm just not sure. Maybe it's because I'm still young, I'm not sure. But what happens to us when we leave this planet? Do our minds just stop existing? Do we just fade away and be forgotten? :S those are just some of the many questions I have. I'm not afraid of actually dieing, that is a part of life. But just not knowing what happens to me scares me.

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elixirphoenix In reply to xRichyx [2007-10-27 03:37:32 +0000 UTC]

I don't know what is true and I think some people are never sure of the higher powers. I'm one of those people, I'm 21 and I haven't figured everything out and probably never will. I just don't let the fear dictate me life.

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xRichyx In reply to elixirphoenix [2007-10-27 03:39:30 +0000 UTC]

The fear doesn't dictate my life...it's just every time i think of the subject I just start to.....I can't explain it, but I just start thinking a lot and....yea.

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