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Published: 2007-09-23 04:24:25 +0000 UTC; Views: 50; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 1
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Description Feeling intertwining feeling
Memory overruling memory
The foundation destroyed
With just one thought
That mutates into thoughts
That destroy the thought
Confusion is nothing new
But give me just one day
To know what I feel
To remember what I remember
To not feel caged
And tormented with things I don't understand
Things that refuse to be understood
To love
And know why I love
To breathe
And know why I breathe
Just one day
To throw this confusion
Far away
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Comments: 4

DevilRoz [2007-09-23 20:09:26 +0000 UTC]

-Gasp- Awesome poem, Jashykins! -Huggles-
I 'specially loved this part:

To love
And know why I love
To breathe
And know why I breathe

^-^

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elixirphoenix In reply to DevilRoz [2007-09-23 21:55:25 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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xRichyx [2007-09-23 04:38:33 +0000 UTC]

I know how you feel, I think? It's sort of this surreal feeling, you like it but you don't, I always get it when I think about someone I like....great poem.

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elixirphoenix In reply to xRichyx [2007-09-23 05:02:30 +0000 UTC]

Thanks
I don't know if I'd say "surreal" over "painful". It's just when you can't decide what you're feeling and you don't want to think about what's actually bothering you. At least that's me feeling at the present.

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