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GirlfriendBoyfriend
What usual terms these words apply
They’re simple terms
For simple minds
But what I feel I can’t classify
I can’t point to a single word that exists
To define how I feel about you
I could speak a thousand years about you
But not even then would I tell you a tenth of what I feel
Words are useless
Actions are thoughtless
If I could show you me thoughts on you
Not even God could comprehend
All the angels and saints would fail in contemplation of it
Even I back down in wonder
You are not divine
But, for my purposes, I can’t tell the difference
Lines of heaven and hell don’t matter
They are words
Not something of my thoughts of you
You are more than words
You are more than thought
The whole universe combined is not you
Could never match your size
Damned I would be if I failed you
Damned would I be if I forgot you
No distances can keep me away from you
If you were on the other side of the world
A hole I would quickly dig
My love for you is too complex for words
What I say always fails at the meaning
Why should I speak of you when I can’t give you credit
The credit you need so dearly so you’ll know
Know that I would die for you
Know that death is no deterrent for me
I do not fear it like others do
As long as it is for you
Girlfriend
Boyfriend
Let those be classifications to help others understand
For the truth would ruin them all
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Comments: 7
Juxtaposition22 [2007-10-19 15:48:25 +0000 UTC]
You are not divine
But, for my purposes, I can’t tell the difference
That is a beautiful sentiment, I like this poem
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elixirphoenix In reply to Juxtaposition22 [2007-10-19 18:12:15 +0000 UTC]
Thanks
I gave this poem to him for his birthday
It was written months before his b-day, though.
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elixirphoenix In reply to jess-izzle [2007-02-19 20:55:23 +0000 UTC]
Thanks
This will probably be in the next cardXD
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PuNaNiiiLiKKaAa [2007-01-22 09:43:18 +0000 UTC]
soz me aint an advanced critique so i just comment in lamen's term's......
rkn bloody awesome poem, It's a thinker
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elixirphoenix In reply to PuNaNiiiLiKKaAa [2007-02-19 20:54:50 +0000 UTC]
Yeah. I think that the terms 'girlfriend' and 'boyfriend' are sort of childish. Then when I use them meself...
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