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elixirphoenix — I Can't
Published: 2007-10-17 14:52:56 +0000 UTC; Views: 49; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 0
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I can't breatheI can't sing
Me insides are being gorged out
Me mind is being torn apart
Me heart beats faster and faster
How can I describe the pain
How can I describe the fear
How can I tell you anything
The past catches up to the present
And deems me damned
I roast in Hell
And the birds sing
And the sun rises
And a new child is born
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Comments: 7
I like your poetry, but the use of 'me' drives me a bit crazy.
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That's good then, I'm crazy
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It's not a bad poem at all, though I'm sure the inspiration was bad to live through.
I'll read more when I get a chance
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Okay
Yeah, it's a good poem but to live through the emotions wasn't good.
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Isn't that always the way of it, and so the brilliant writer's continue to suffer for their art LOL
Keep up the good work though
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): Did someone hurt you...because, ouch that poem was filled with some deep lines. I hope everything gets better, if there's something wrong...but at least you can express your emotions.
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Just a past memory that keeps coming back, and having to push it back away. No one did anything bad to me recently
Plus the fact that I was stressed.
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