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elixirphoenix — I Smell
Published: 2007-06-06 02:34:29 +0000 UTC; Views: 65; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 0
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Description I smell a rotting carcass
I smell a dying rat
Me God
Me God
What small is that
I delve a little deeper
I sniff all around
I find the smell
I fall to the ground
I turn all around
Me God
Me God
It's me
Me nose has found
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Comments: 5

kingtut98 [2007-06-09 19:45:27 +0000 UTC]

Amazing poem. Simple, yet aromatic.

I hope when you say "can't properly put into words how horrible I smelled today," you mean "I think I overdid it a bit with 'dying rat.'"

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elixirphoenix In reply to kingtut98 [2007-06-10 02:25:21 +0000 UTC]

I don't think I overdid itO.o
Er...I didn't say that!

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youneverasked [2007-06-07 02:13:11 +0000 UTC]

O...K...
Please tell me you mean that figuratively.

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elixirphoenix In reply to youneverasked [2007-06-07 15:32:10 +0000 UTC]

Would that make you feel better?

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youneverasked In reply to elixirphoenix [2007-06-08 02:39:49 +0000 UTC]

Well, I try to stay away from things that smell like "rotting carcasses."

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