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I will not use words for me benefitI will use words as they want to be used
I will not shame me enemies
I will show them honor as they die
I will not curse me family
I will be their comforter in their time of need
Follow these, me friend, and go far
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Comments: 8
youneverasked [2007-04-20 07:20:58 +0000 UTC]
Honor as you may...
...the enemies die anyway!
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youneverasked In reply to elixirphoenix [2007-04-20 22:49:26 +0000 UTC]
I didn't intend for that to rhyme.
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faux-bolto [2007-04-20 04:05:05 +0000 UTC]
did you mean to use 'me' all the time?
would it be better to use 'my'?
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elixirphoenix In reply to faux-bolto [2007-04-20 04:24:35 +0000 UTC]
I like to use "me" instead of "my" in me poetry
Makes the poem more real to me that way
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faux-bolto In reply to elixirphoenix [2007-04-20 04:27:01 +0000 UTC]
cool no problem, i like it anyway,
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