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elixirphoenix — I Will Not, I Will
Published: 2007-04-20 04:03:09 +0000 UTC; Views: 46; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 0
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Description I will not use words for me benefit
I will use words as they want to be used
I will not shame me enemies
I will show them honor as they die
I will not curse me family
I will be their comforter in their time of need
Follow these, me friend, and go far
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Comments: 8

youneverasked [2007-04-20 07:20:58 +0000 UTC]

Honor as you may...
...the enemies die anyway!

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elixirphoenix In reply to youneverasked [2007-04-20 17:49:28 +0000 UTC]

Good oneXD

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youneverasked In reply to elixirphoenix [2007-04-20 22:49:26 +0000 UTC]

I didn't intend for that to rhyme.

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elixirphoenix In reply to youneverasked [2007-04-20 23:07:21 +0000 UTC]

Sure you didn't...

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faux-bolto [2007-04-20 04:05:05 +0000 UTC]

did you mean to use 'me' all the time?
would it be better to use 'my'?

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elixirphoenix In reply to faux-bolto [2007-04-20 04:24:35 +0000 UTC]

I like to use "me" instead of "my" in me poetry

Makes the poem more real to me that way

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faux-bolto In reply to elixirphoenix [2007-04-20 04:27:01 +0000 UTC]

cool no problem, i like it anyway,

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elixirphoenix In reply to faux-bolto [2007-04-20 06:46:20 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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