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Published: 2007-07-30 02:39:26 +0000 UTC; Views: 45; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 0
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Does it matterAbout me looks
Is the self the body
Or something deeper
Richer than the best chocolate
Better than the summer days
Something that you cannot
Tell with your eyes
But with your soul
Does that sixth sense
Not exist for you
Can you not seek something more
We are more than just our bodies
We are more than just our looks
So tell me what you see
When you see your mirror's reflection
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Comments: 7
Very nice. Deep and emotional. It reminds me something I once asked Aline... Ya know what, you inspired me. Back to writing!
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noticed a typo "ore" is ARE.
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Question.
Why do you always say stuff like "me looks". Instead of the possessive "my looks".
It confuses me.
^_^
Otherwise. Great piece.
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On the comp I use "me" instead of "my". I put it into me poetry since poetry expresses the soul, and it connects me more with me poetry.
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