HOME | DD

elixirphoenix — Some Demons
Published: 2008-03-03 03:47:17 +0000 UTC; Views: 68; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 4
Redirect to original
Description Some demons you can face with a group
Some demons you can face with friends
And family
But some demons you must face alone
Sometimes your death
Is something that only you can prevent
Do not lie to me
Don't even try
I put the past in the past
And the demon keeps coming back
I have moved on
But still I can't rest
So if I die in this fight
Leave me to burn
Leave me to cry
Even if you could help me
Don't
I must strengthen meself
Or else I will always fail
So I will face this demon alone
Tonight
With you cheering in the background
And the ability to fail
Related content
Comments: 5

Juxtaposition22 [2008-03-03 15:33:57 +0000 UTC]

Leave me to burn
Leave me to cry

I like the repetition here, the fact that it repeats really reinforces the "back off" feeling I got from the whole piece

good job

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

elixirphoenix In reply to Juxtaposition22 [2008-03-03 16:42:18 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

tu2 [2008-03-03 07:00:09 +0000 UTC]

i lyk it!!
i get pretty drawn into it!!

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

elixirphoenix In reply to tu2 [2008-03-03 14:40:48 +0000 UTC]

Thanks
You get pretty drawn into it?
What does that mean?

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

tu2 In reply to elixirphoenix [2008-03-04 08:15:24 +0000 UTC]

Lol!!
don't worry!!

👍: 0 ⏩: 0