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Published: 2008-01-07 05:07:45 +0000 UTC; Views: 89; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 0
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Description Your cool breeze brings false serenity
Your salty air gives a false hope
The singularity of me soul
Cannot divide from loneliness
The stars shine bright
Paving hope for others
But I lie on me back
There is no death
There is no life
Just a hopeless
Maneuvering between the two
I must stay on this beach
Waiting for another
Waiting for another lonely soul
That won't let others in
So that me loneliness
Will also be shared with another
The only thing I can give
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Comments: 4

Juxtaposition22 [2008-01-07 15:06:42 +0000 UTC]

Dogs always love the beach, I think it's all the smells.

I find that most intelligent people also fell isolated alot of the time. So I suppose you can at least be happy that your lonliness means you're not dumb

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elixirphoenix In reply to Juxtaposition22 [2008-01-07 18:46:22 +0000 UTC]

TrueXD
That's a good part

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GrandLordAtos [2008-01-07 06:01:14 +0000 UTC]

Florida, eh? Nice. ^^

The poem seems so sad. I always thought beaches made people happy. V_V You know how to grasp people's emotions, Elixir. I commend you for that.

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elixirphoenix In reply to GrandLordAtos [2008-01-07 06:07:00 +0000 UTC]

Thanks
I actually don't like going to beaches...me dog, Sadie, loves the beach, thoughO.o

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