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elixirphoenix — Unfeeling
Published: 2007-09-07 20:24:44 +0000 UTC; Views: 90; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 2
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Description You may call me unfeeling
You may say that I am too harsh
Say all the things you wish
Me life has made me this way
I refuse to be what I used to be
I refuse to be what they said I should be
I will work out
Life for meself
I will work out
Me destiny by meself
Don't deny me
What is rightfully mine
I have traveled this far
Nothing can hold me back
From getting to the end of the road
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xRichyx [2007-09-09 21:05:03 +0000 UTC]

I don't have a problem with how you view the world either, everyone has their own different views, I like the way you use me instead of my, it adds your personality to your poems, I think anyway.

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elixirphoenix In reply to xRichyx [2007-09-09 21:47:58 +0000 UTC]

Yeah
I use "me" instead of "my" because it just makes it sound more personal.

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