HOME | DD

elixirphoenix — When I...
Published: 2007-05-11 02:07:46 +0000 UTC; Views: 47; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 3
Redirect to original
Description I try and deny meself
The gun pressed up against me head
I try and deny meself
That trigger must be pulled
I try and deny meself
And brains splatter over the walls
I try and deny meself
All is silent
Related content
Comments: 4

youneverasked [2007-05-12 04:25:31 +0000 UTC]

You can't keep from feeling them, though. You have to find a way to deal with them. And this one, I don't recommend.
You know, I was reading something some one wrote, (yeah, I know, how specific is that?) and they said that the only time they feel inspired to write is when they had something negative to say. I told them that that was ridiculous, like saying that you can't eat cookies unless you're starving. (I really hope it wasn't you I said that to earlier, or I'm going to feel really silly.)
Bottom line: You have such skill in drawing out the emotions of others. Could you maybe try something cheery? I'm not trying to disrupt your artistic style, but I do read all of your deviations, and it does become a little depressing after a while.
Uhhh... Sorry for the long comment.

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

elixirphoenix In reply to youneverasked [2007-05-12 23:03:03 +0000 UTC]

Okay. I'll try for something cheery, but not sure. And I know I have to deal with me emotions. But it's not always pleasent.

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

deviantduck [2007-05-11 02:14:07 +0000 UTC]

That's really deep. I just love it. Favoriting!

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

elixirphoenix In reply to deviantduck [2007-05-11 03:06:26 +0000 UTC]

Thanks very much
And glad you enjoyed

👍: 0 ⏩: 0