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Published: 2012-06-11 17:08:09 +0000 UTC; Views: 2005; Favourites: 21; Downloads: 37
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I've been working on and off of this for a couple days!This is a scene from book 1 of Project FALL (the series I am writing) and is a scene I have coming up that I have to write. This was meant just to be a tool to get some lines down. Which will probably change when I actually write the scene.
Here we have Angelie escaping from somewhere with Blaze Firestorm and Dedric, a leader of a group of thieves in this port city.
He remembers a spell he was taught to him when he was 10 (on his birthday actually) and uses it to signal Akiore for help. They're kinda like fireworks, and that's what people use them for during celebrations. It's a pretty sight. The sky filled with the lights of hundreds of people's souls.
I'm not sure if Angelie will be better off when Akiore, Jillian and co find him though.
Angelie has a rough life as a prince.
Also, this city is outside of his kingdom's land. He's not wearing his usual clothing so people wont know who he is, as well as what race he is.
Angelie and all the guys in the last panel are Angelus, and children of the Sun. So they have wings. Dedric and the citizens of Coll and that entire region are a mixed race. Humans and Angelus. They look exactly the same, except because they have human blood (the children of earth), the earth counters the sky blood in them, and they don't have wings. The Wingless are not permitted to live in Angelus cities, so that their blood will not exterminate the the Angelus.
Blaze is half child of fire though, the other half being a child of the sun. So his race's features are less defined. A full blooded child of fire looks different.
And that's enough of an info dump!
I'ma going to go write now.
Any comments are welcomed! And you can find more Project FALL art here: [link]
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Comments: 16
AlexanderSC [2012-06-24 20:42:23 +0000 UTC]
Oh, I love it... i don't know that much english, but, you're great!
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tck2Peru [2012-06-13 14:38:15 +0000 UTC]
I love how whenever you tell us things, instead of being enlightened as to how things work, I end up more confused. OTL I'm probably being a derp but I actually do like it. It keeps from revealing spoilers.
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ElizaLento In reply to tck2Peru [2012-06-13 14:48:32 +0000 UTC]
C:<
Yes, I do this on purpose. I can't resist not sharing, so I share in a way that will still confuse people/not spoil everything.
Still, everyone knows Akiore goes bad at some point.
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tck2Peru In reply to ElizaLento [2012-06-13 15:58:45 +0000 UTC]
Pretty sure everyone but me does that. Is it like some writers' expectation to be cryptic about stuff? Because I totally missed the memo...
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ElizaLento In reply to tck2Peru [2012-06-13 16:01:02 +0000 UTC]
It sucks, but it's like some sort of code I guess.
I'll probably have to delete a good chunk of my gallery when I do publish/finish the first book.
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tck2Peru In reply to ElizaLento [2012-06-13 17:05:56 +0000 UTC]
I guess I've been going "screw da police" unintentionally XP
nyuuuuuu! aww. but at least the book will be out and I will devour it in one day regardless of length.
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Jaqueline-Keen [2012-06-11 23:49:12 +0000 UTC]
Getting insight to your project is making me want to work on my own story. *glares at unfisned mini stories.*
This comic is lovely and I hope your book gets published when it's done.
So I can read it.
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ElizaLento In reply to Jaqueline-Keen [2012-06-11 23:56:36 +0000 UTC]
Don't sweat it, I'm not even close to being done this damn book. I keep drawing pictures instead of writing:/
Thanks! And I do too :'D
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Jaqueline-Keen In reply to ElizaLento [2012-06-12 00:05:55 +0000 UTC]
I'm going through this weird fairy stage, but I suck at drawing them....
*stalks your gallery.*
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ElizaLento In reply to Jaqueline-Keen [2012-06-12 00:10:59 +0000 UTC]
I can't remember if I ever went through a fairy stage... I don't think so. Mostly because no fairies in my books:/
And don't travel too far back in my gallery...it is a scary and terrible place.
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Jaqueline-Keen In reply to ElizaLento [2012-06-12 00:14:35 +0000 UTC]
I've got this whole story going on in my head where the Fairies basically run the Faye realm but the Sprites want their kingdom back but their people aren't strong enough to stand up to the Fairy Empire, blah blah blah war blah.
Hey it can't be as bad as my old art books. *shudder.*
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alwaysroza [2012-06-11 19:06:38 +0000 UTC]
Loving the fifth and the last panel tbh. Can't wait to read this when you finish!!
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ElizaLento In reply to alwaysroza [2012-06-11 19:19:44 +0000 UTC]
Probably mine as well. I wish panel 4 had turned out better though:/
And yea, I've got a ways to go before the book is done. But I'll probably be putting out a sample chapter soon.
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alwaysroza In reply to ElizaLento [2012-06-11 20:41:10 +0000 UTC]
You're such a little perfectionist some times. All of the panels are quite awesome.
Cheers for the sample chapter.
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ElizaLento In reply to alwaysroza [2012-06-11 22:43:26 +0000 UTC]
But not as awesome as others
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