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Published: 2006-10-30 13:52:47 +0000 UTC; Views: 184; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 1
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Rain falls softly on my windshieldAs if to warn me of Autumn's imminent arrival
And James Taylor croons his "greatest hits"
Quietly out my stereo.
Your face raises, again,
Unbidden into my memory.
A reminder of when times were simpler.
I am happy now,
As I never truly was in our short time together,
But the gloom of impending storm
Brings up my sentimentality
And I wonder what might have been.
I loved you,
Though I never had the courage to tell you,
Despite the fact that our relationship
Was little more than an extended
One-night stand.
I wonder if you knew.
I wonder if you think of me.
Does a song ever bring back hidden memories
Of dancing to Miles Davis,
Of sitting in a garden in the rain,
Of laughter, of rolling in the grass?
Do you see a girl walking
And wonder briefly if it's me?
I've moved on,
I've found a new love,
I imagine so have you.
But still, on some brief occasions,
My mind drifts off to Carolina
And what could have been.
Comments: 4
kainwolf [2008-03-30 01:30:41 +0000 UTC]
Oh so true does our mind play simple, painfull tricks on us when we are alone. We think we are happy, we think we have all that we can, but when it comes down to it, our mind plays the trick again.
(Sorry if I started writeing a little poem my self, I couldn't help it.) This is a decent poem and actualy holds my attention for longer then most others. I wish you luck and hope for the best.
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elvinpixie In reply to kainwolf [2008-03-30 02:32:26 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much, both for the comment and for the addition to your collection. It means a lot to know that people can relate to my writing.
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kainwolf In reply to elvinpixie [2008-03-30 04:53:22 +0000 UTC]
It's more then relate, but also respect good writers. And I wouldn't have found your little corner here if it wasn't for peter.
But you know what, I am glad I did because it actualy inspires me to know there are more writers around here.
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toptecky [2007-02-19 15:48:59 +0000 UTC]
A breif encounter with your work, leaves me reading on.
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