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Published: 2014-02-10 21:47:29 +0000 UTC; Views: 244; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 0
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Can one care too much, that one may lose himself? I would rather be lost in snow and trees, than be lost in your eyes. Not that they are cold, nor harsh, but to gaze into them and see such beauty; How did your soak up such warmth if not stolen from the Sun?It may be cold and below freezing, and you may be away, but as time continues, chosen paths may change, and as far away as you may be, I tilt away from you, my heart still slightly frozen. Yet you still radiate such brilliance, and find away to warm my heart.
Comments: 3
blackava [2014-02-10 21:59:34 +0000 UTC]
wow! that was so beautiful! real meaning and a great piece
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emonightwalker In reply to blackava [2014-02-10 23:54:03 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very much. Everything I write comes from my heart.
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blackava In reply to emonightwalker [2014-02-11 00:41:14 +0000 UTC]
i can tell. its very good. hey if you could check out my short story i would really appreciate it
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