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Published: 2003-09-08 19:28:13 +0000 UTC; Views: 649; Favourites: 7; Downloads: 258
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As she lays thereHer legs wide spread
Gently..
He whispers softly
Sweet words in her
cold ear
She wants to believe him
When he says:
'Everything will be alright
Relax and don't pay attention
To the pain
It's done before you know it..'
Somewhere,deep inside
She knows she should run
And hide for the pain
That will soon be in her
Gently...
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Comments: 10
militantinsanity [2003-09-19 02:48:14 +0000 UTC]
that's really good, now i shall read the others... and i KNOW that they will be good to... they always are!
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vaoni-stock [2003-09-14 10:38:01 +0000 UTC]
i've read all 4 poems of this series and love them all
so therefore, a fav from me for each of them
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blackest [2003-09-09 14:30:09 +0000 UTC]
okay.. i lik the poem but i cant help myself for i truly relate it to slipknot.. its kinda real similar to some of their lyrics..dunno if u like them or stuff but it turned out really similar sO i guess sOmething is missing for originality..
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emptyness In reply to blackest [2003-09-09 14:33:41 +0000 UTC]
yeah..scissors...right?
all most all of the things are posted here are old..so I really don't know who was first anyway...SlipKnoT or me...
but thanks for commenting anyway
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blackest In reply to emptyness [2003-09-09 14:39:43 +0000 UTC]
yeah..that and other ones.. anyway im glad u didnt took my comment on the wrong way.. and yeah.. nothing is original these days.. and of course corey taylor is no xception.. i just said that cuz slipknot are know world wide and im sure their lyrics influence lots of persons (the true fans for instance).
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emptyness In reply to blackest [2003-09-09 15:00:29 +0000 UTC]
I should really take a look at your stuff now
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morganaarau [2003-09-09 07:51:52 +0000 UTC]
...devilicious is right... potently (and gently) disturbing... sad but delicate...
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