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Published: 2015-07-05 17:59:44 +0000 UTC; Views: 6311; Favourites: 17; Downloads: 6
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konnichiwa! (thats romaji for hello!) nwn anywAY this is my Madoka Magica, FNAF, CUte high earth defence club, hetalia, Vocaloid, Inuyasha, Assasination classroom, kagerou Project, Seraph of the end, Wadanohara and the great blyue sea, Mogeko castle, Diabolik lovers, Β Attack on titan, and Tokyo Ghoul OC. Her name is Hoshi Nekoimi (western order) Hoshi means star because ssTAr.she's a cat demon, titan shifter, magical girl, and vocaloid!(i can't say how much percentage she is, gomenosai i suck at math) she turns into a female titan like annie but she has different hair and face and stuff and she's bigger she's a 50 meter class. she was contracted by kyubey and wombat because she's the 6th battle lover but the only girLl of them. she can't turn into a witch or die even if you break her soul gem (its on her chest). she has as much potential as madoka. she can also travel between feudal japan and modern japan! her vocaloid voice is very nicee and she's miku's sister. (her hair is miku color but she uses lots of hair dye). she is purple guy's adopted sister and is friends with the animatronics but her favorites are mango an fuxy BUt she ships frexy so oh yeah she's a country too btw and she has an eye power from Kagerou project, her power is to cancel other eye powerss and she goes to the e class for killing somebody (assassination classrom) and she's a yandere and she has a harem with the vampir brothers and is a seraph and vampire! she is also part mogeko!!!!!! oh yeah and she is a ghoul too with only one eye (naturally!!)
likes: singing, murder, mochi ice cream, mochis, yaooi, yuri, candy
dislikes: chica, hungry,belagoose,seashellsy, kyubey
friends: everyone except chica and girl countries
bf/gfs/whatevrers: en, yumoto, naruko, ryu, io, england, america, russia, china, iceland, nowrway, sweden, finland, kaito, meiko, miku, luka, mayu, vflower, macne nana, teto kasane, namine ritsu, kuroha, konoha, ene, shintaro kisaragi, momo, kido, kano, seto, homura, madoka, mami, sayaka, kyouko, nagisa momoe, nagisa shiota, karma, korosensei, armin, eren, mikasa, sasha, connie, levi, ayato sakamaki, reiji, subaru, kanato, raito, shu, yui, mikaela, yuu, yoichi,wadanohara, samekichi, fukami, dolphi, memoca, cherryblod, sal, uomi, mikotsu, yonaka, defect mogeko, shinya, kaneki, touka, yoriko, ayato, tsukiyama
don't steal please pls review though nwn!!!
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Comments: 143
en-yufuin In reply to ??? [2015-07-17 22:03:28 +0000 UTC]
i amvery gomen i don't know why or how???? nobody barely explainΒ
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Wlitershy1894 In reply to en-yufuin [2015-07-17 22:08:33 +0000 UTC]
Omg yourΒ orthography sucks. i didnt understand.Β
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en-yufuin In reply to Wlitershy1894 [2015-07-17 22:13:09 +0000 UTC]
i dont know what orthography is im sorry i use of the google translate
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en-yufuin In reply to Wlitershy1894 [2015-07-17 22:37:30 +0000 UTC]
why would of you send me sex word????!
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Wlitershy1894 In reply to en-yufuin [2015-07-17 22:44:38 +0000 UTC]
x'D thats not a sex word. xDDDDD Β search orthography. Β is the way you type the words,good or bad :'v
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en-yufuin In reply to Wlitershy1894 [2015-07-17 22:52:19 +0000 UTC]
oh well i am the use of google translate is not me
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UmieArt In reply to ??? [2015-07-17 21:49:21 +0000 UTC]
Mary Sue and way too OP.. troll much or are you actually serious? lol
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PrismElectro In reply to UmieArt [2015-07-18 16:25:52 +0000 UTC]
/Of course they're a troll/
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en-yufuin In reply to UmieArt [2015-07-17 22:00:05 +0000 UTC]
i am not a troll! why people think so i do not know??
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UmieArt In reply to en-yufuin [2015-07-17 22:15:35 +0000 UTC]
Your character is over-powered. People hate that. Delete 40 out of 50 of the things you actually have in the description and the character might be likable..
That's the reason you're getting so much hate, what you're doing ><
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en-yufuin In reply to UmieArt [2015-07-17 22:16:48 +0000 UTC]
oh but i like her maybe to do of the remake one day so hate will go away from meΒ
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UmieArt In reply to en-yufuin [2015-07-17 22:20:26 +0000 UTC]
If you want I can help you make her less.. "mary sue", and make her more realistic and actually likeable.
If you don't want that though, this is what you need to do: Make her have flaws. A lot, lot of them.
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en-yufuin In reply to UmieArt [2015-07-17 22:21:35 +0000 UTC]
ill try to make many flaws when remake come out and take litmus test for the mary sue i am listeniong to advice
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UmieArt In reply to en-yufuin [2015-07-17 22:23:14 +0000 UTC]
If you want I can help you re-write everything, you could keep some things but not all of them of course.
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en-yufuin In reply to UmieArt [2015-07-17 22:25:03 +0000 UTC]
i am of the fine i'll try to do it on my own so i know of the better next time Β
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en-yufuin In reply to z-eette [2015-07-17 21:59:41 +0000 UTC]
i do not have the understand?? why is mary sue
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z-eette In reply to en-yufuin [2015-07-17 22:21:43 +0000 UTC]
Do you understand the word 'Mary Sue'?Β
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en-yufuin In reply to z-eette [2015-07-17 22:24:05 +0000 UTC]
ye but i do not grasp the mary sue is hoshi??
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z-eette In reply to en-yufuin [2015-07-17 22:26:17 +0000 UTC]
'this is my Madoka Magica, FNAF, CUte high earth defence club, hetalia, Vocaloid, Inuyasha, Assasination classroom, kagerou Project, Seraph of the end, Diabolik lovers, and Attack on titan OC. Her name is Hoshi Nekoimi (western order) Hoshi means star because ssTAr.
she's a cat demon, titan shifter, magical girl, and vocaloid!(i can't say how much percentage she is, gomenosai i suck at math) she turns into a female titan like annie but she has different hair and face and stuff and she's bigger she's a 50 meter class. she was contracted by kyubey and wombat because she's the 6th battle lover but the only girLl of them. she can't turn into a witch or die even if you break her soul gem (its on her chest). she has as much potential as madoka. she can also travel between feudal japan and modern japan! her vocaloid voice is very nicee and she's miku's sister. (her hair is miku color but she uses lots of hair dye). she is purple guy's adopted sister and is friends with the animatronics but her favorites are mango an fuxy BUt she ships frexy so oh yeah she's a country too btw and she has an eye power from Kagerou project, her power is to cancel other eye powerss and she goes to the e class for killing somebody (assassination classrom) and she's a yandere and she has a harem with the vampir brothers and is a seraph and vampire!'
All of this information it's a great definition of a Mary Sue.Β
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en-yufuin In reply to z-eette [2015-07-17 22:32:11 +0000 UTC]
taht just the description i am very lost but i try to fix her?
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z-eette In reply to en-yufuin [2015-07-17 22:41:03 +0000 UTC]
No. You can't.
She's a Mary Sue now.Β
What you have to do is delete her.Β
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en-yufuin In reply to z-eette [2015-07-17 22:43:03 +0000 UTC]
whAT i cannot of the kill her!! i was told by the poeple that i could fix her
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MeetTheBonk13 In reply to en-yufuin [2015-07-20 01:37:43 +0000 UTC]
I've killed some of my characters
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HarmonyParty In reply to ??? [2015-07-17 21:26:23 +0000 UTC]
Not being trying rude, but you're character's a Mary Sue.. I can help you improve it!
Unless you're a troll on something.
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en-yufuin In reply to HarmonyParty [2015-07-17 21:58:52 +0000 UTC]
ok but i am not troll...? she is small mary sue if any ok
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HarmonyParty In reply to en-yufuin [2015-07-17 22:06:15 +0000 UTC]
Okay, but your OC isn't "small", she's huge. Like, infecting every fandom huge. Possibly stick to ONE Fandom, and make her have flaws. I can help. We can chat together in my chatroom if you'd like.
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en-yufuin In reply to HarmonyParty [2015-07-17 22:09:05 +0000 UTC]
ok but she is not of every fandom just some because do not want to make different ocs i like her
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catcollector129 In reply to ??? [2015-07-17 07:08:45 +0000 UTC]
So, you drew it by yourself
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en-yufuin In reply to catcollector129 [2015-07-17 21:07:58 +0000 UTC]
yeas i did in ms paind nwn sometimes use of the tablet but not much at all i only use to write because tablet is illegal in draw and is cheating
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Kyanye In reply to ??? [2015-07-06 01:33:41 +0000 UTC]
My friend ships your OC with shrek
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en-yufuin In reply to Kyanye [2015-07-06 14:50:35 +0000 UTC]
hoshi loves everyone!!! nwn
except chica and those sstUPIDDD girl countries and kyubey
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Kyanye In reply to en-yufuin [2015-07-06 22:14:01 +0000 UTC]
Yes everyone who gets in the way of her ships
Like bloom luna
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Kyanye In reply to ??? [2015-07-06 01:11:05 +0000 UTC]
Guys I just found another Bloom Luna
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en-yufuin In reply to Kyanye [2015-07-06 14:48:15 +0000 UTC]
i don't know who Bloom Luna-san is, i'm very gomenasorry google isn't working for me right nnOW Β >n<"
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