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Published: 2015-07-05 17:59:44 +0000 UTC; Views: 6308; Favourites: 17; Downloads: 6
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Description konnichiwa! (thats romaji for hello!) nwn anywAY this is my Madoka Magica, FNAF, CUte high earth defence club, hetalia, Vocaloid, Inuyasha, Assasination classroom, kagerou Project, Seraph of the end, Wadanohara and the great blyue sea, Mogeko castle, Diabolik lovers,  Attack on titan, and Tokyo Ghoul OC. Her name is Hoshi Nekoimi (western order) Hoshi means star because ssTAr.

she's a cat demon, titan shifter, magical girl, and vocaloid!(i can't say how much percentage she is, gomenosai i suck at math) she turns into a female titan like annie but she has different hair and face and stuff and she's bigger she's a 50 meter class. she was contracted by kyubey and wombat because she's the 6th battle lover but the only girLl of them. she can't turn into a witch or die even if you break her soul gem (its on her chest). she has as much potential as madoka. she can also travel between feudal japan and modern japan! her vocaloid voice is very nicee and she's miku's sister. (her hair is miku color but she uses lots of hair dye). she is purple guy's adopted sister and is friends with the animatronics but her favorites are mango an fuxy BUt she ships frexy so oh yeah she's a country too btw and she has an eye power from Kagerou project, her power is to cancel other eye powerss and she goes to the e class for killing somebody (assassination classrom) and she's a yandere and she has a harem with the vampir brothers and is a seraph and vampire! she is also part mogeko!!!!!! oh yeah and she is a ghoul too with only one eye (naturally!!)

likes: singing, murder, mochi ice cream, mochis, yaooi, yuri, candy
dislikes: chica, hungry,belagoose,seashellsy, kyubey

friends: everyone except chica and girl countries
bf/gfs/whatevrers: en, yumoto, naruko, ryu, io, england, america, russia, china, iceland, nowrway, sweden, finland, kaito, meiko, miku, luka, mayu, vflower, macne nana, teto kasane, namine ritsu, kuroha, konoha, ene, shintaro kisaragi, momo, kido, kano, seto, homura, madoka, mami, sayaka, kyouko, nagisa momoe, nagisa shiota, karma, korosensei, armin, eren, mikasa, sasha, connie, levi, ayato sakamaki, reiji, subaru, kanato, raito, shu, yui, mikaela, yuu, yoichi,wadanohara, samekichi, fukami, dolphi, memoca, cherryblod, sal, uomi, mikotsu, yonaka, defect mogeko, shinya, kaneki, touka, yoriko, ayato, tsukiyama

don't steal please pls review though nwn!!!
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Comments: 143

theuniquelyweirdo [2018-03-24 02:12:15 +0000 UTC]

                                                        

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Mooflepuff21 [2018-02-04 22:00:55 +0000 UTC]

Welp. I think I found the mothership of troll mary-sues. 

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joyllyor [2017-11-25 13:11:38 +0000 UTC]

                     

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Swizzlez [2017-09-26 04:44:48 +0000 UTC]

                    

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ArcticQuartz [2017-09-24 20:08:34 +0000 UTC]

boo this is a troll

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Bambooprincessshadow [2017-08-12 19:32:41 +0000 UTC]

...........................................................

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thespiderlily30 [2017-02-28 01:12:53 +0000 UTC]

totally a troll. Lol.

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Nekochii08 [2017-02-17 23:34:16 +0000 UTC]

Where is the bleach when I need it.

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Mabzy In reply to Nekochii08 [2017-11-11 22:46:57 +0000 UTC]

                                                         

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Hexidextrous [2016-12-26 21:13:10 +0000 UTC]

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WalkingAnxiety [2016-11-25 19:38:36 +0000 UTC]

//cough. Mm. Oh boi. So uh, this OC is. It's a marysue. I'm sorry but, it is. The colors are eye straining and the lines are just messy. Also, the personality could be a bit. Less? I have to admit, it's not that bad. But. Uhg.

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Anniethespider [2016-11-06 21:08:24 +0000 UTC]

ew

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Marachunos127 [2016-06-14 03:21:05 +0000 UTC]

OH MY GAWD. BURN IT. BURN IT IN FIRE. THIS IS A FRICKIN' MARY SUE..... MY EYES, THEY BURRRNNN--            

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zackosletacos [2016-06-04 20:48:50 +0000 UTC]

Heeey ! I know it's pretty old but, do you need some help with your OC ? I'm not trying to seem mean but she's not a really good character... I think if some people give you some help and that you try to work a little bit more on her it'll make her better !
If you already have some ideas for her you can ask me and maybe ask what I think. I'm trying to help you see ! If you do not agree with what I say it's fine. You can keep her the way she is, I think the most important part here is that you're having fun with her, and even in the character is not really good it's not making direct harm to people ! So yeah, if you want some help just ask, I'm glad to help you !! (sorry for my english, it's not my first language and I'm still learning)

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S0R4RU [2016-05-13 12:32:10 +0000 UTC]

何だ一体..

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TRON-Legacy-Clu [2016-05-04 03:42:10 +0000 UTC]

Ehhhhhhhh
Sorry to say this buut 
There is no country with that flag.  My OC is Antarctica (I couldn't think of any countries) and yea.  And if you could remove just about half or more than half of the people in the bfs/gfs/whatever section. ALSO you might want to separate the bf gf and friends in different sections.  No not BFS but BF.  If someone has like 100 boyfriends, they're definitely a whore.  And only have one special thing about her.  Like with Arci (My Hetalia OC), her special thing is that she plays hockey.  That's it.  And maybe only make her from one fandom or no fandom at all.  And also, having relations with any character that is not official is bad m'kay?  Arci isn't related to anyone because in real life Antarctica is a barren chunk of ice that was found by a British explorer named Captain James Cook. The colouring was a bit off in some parts and the OC overall could've been wayyyy better.  Don't take this as hate but as a critique.  Also some things you would want to include is a personality, better backstory, and sexuality.
Thanks for reading and have a nice day/night.

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en-yufuin In reply to TRON-Legacy-Clu [2016-05-05 02:32:20 +0000 UTC]

thanke you but this is kind of old ^^" hoshi-chan is getting a remake for my fan manga so she be better soon i will think about your advice ^^

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TRON-Legacy-Clu In reply to en-yufuin [2016-05-05 04:22:06 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for taking the time to actually read this long, drawn out, comment.  Usually when I'd make comments like this, the artist only reads the first line and goes straight to reply.  And thank you for noticing this (I never get noticed by artists often)

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en-yufuin In reply to TRON-Legacy-Clu [2016-05-06 04:03:00 +0000 UTC]

it is no problem, i read all of my comments but usually i read them too late to reply ^^" i like to read comments because it usually help me not sound as stupid and avoid arguments with other deviants. 

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TRON-Legacy-Clu In reply to en-yufuin [2016-05-06 04:06:18 +0000 UTC]

I love avoiding arguments and I love just talking.

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en-yufuin [2016-05-03 00:41:16 +0000 UTC]

a man i remember drawinge this ^^ i loste orginial sai file but it ok

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Chisanaokami13 [2016-01-14 21:58:53 +0000 UTC]

This is either a Mary Sue or a joke....

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Powerpuffwitches [2015-12-26 15:10:56 +0000 UTC]

I am sorry to say that your oc is a huge Mary Sue.
Mary Sue:Mary Sue

See Mary-Sue . A female fanfiction  character who is so perfect as to be annoying. The male equivlalent is the Marty-Stu . Often abbreviated to "Sue". A Mary Sue character is usually written by a beginning author. Often, the Mary Sue is a self-insert with a few "improvements" (ex. better body, more popular, etc). The Mary Sue character is almost always beautiful, smart, etc... In short, she is the "perfect" girl. The Mary Sue usually falls in love with the author's favorite character(s) and winds up upstaging all of the other characters in the book/series/universe. 
She needs a lot of work.And I can give you some advice.
1.Only put her in one fandom,that is more realistic.
2.Change her hair colour,use natural hair colour(Black,Brown,Blonde or Red).If you want a bright colour,use one only,don't use rainbow,that is very unrealistic.
3.Her clothes,if you are going to put her in a horror game/Boy manga,she should not wear dress because that will cause her trouble.A plain shirt and pants fits perfectly.
4.Told us her backstory,don't make it too sad,make it fits the story.

I know you may think that making her cute is make her loveable but in fact that only make her boring,unoriginal and bland.Trust me,I had a oc like this when I was younger.And my sister and brother didn't talk to me for six month because I was very childish and immature.

You seems to be a kid(under 13 years old breaks the rule and the user will be banned).I hope you can take my advice.You are the only Mary Sue creator has a better attitude I seen on DA.

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BoederMan [2015-12-11 21:17:29 +0000 UTC]

Is this Sans from Powerpuff ponies?

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en-yufuin In reply to BoederMan [2015-12-11 23:55:17 +0000 UTC]

no, sorry, this is Fetty Wap from Five nights on titan

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BoederMan In reply to en-yufuin [2015-12-12 00:25:57 +0000 UTC]

oh wow my bad

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Deluxiedraws [2015-11-07 10:53:03 +0000 UTC]

kk its gud ;-;

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Implosion-Explosion [2015-10-18 20:38:07 +0000 UTC]


what is this?
what is this piece of Rainbow Mary-sue shit?

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SilentlyMoges [2015-10-01 13:45:51 +0000 UTC]

shes really cute, although it's funner to make an OC for each fandom :3

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FlerZeRandom [2015-08-28 20:17:54 +0000 UTC]

I'M NOT SURE IF THIS IS A JOKE OC ANYMORE OR NOT

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en-yufuin In reply to FlerZeRandom [2015-08-30 05:12:55 +0000 UTC]

? it is not a joke

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SunPowah88 [2015-08-22 05:28:40 +0000 UTC]

I dunno if she would fit as a FNAF oc, because you know, fnaf is most likely to be an game to scare people, and your OC here is a bit too bright, and she has WAYY too much power. try to tone it own a bit, because most of them are kinda un fitting for FNAF. Also how come she does not like chica? is it because shes the only girl in fnaf? im not trying to be rude, its just a bit unfitting for the fnaf games. this oc is more like a happy one, and should not fit in a horror genre.

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MebtheMebling1112 [2015-08-20 22:57:35 +0000 UTC]

What is a Titan? XD
Is it like the Greek things?
Also..my eyes are burning..make the colors a bit more dim?
Few more questions, why doesn't she like Chica? Why is there SO. MUCH. ANIME?
I don't watch anime I don't know what all this is....and..what is with the love stick? O.o'
Why can't she die? That seems a bit too Op...Why do you ship her with Pg and foxy..?
PG would stab a girl..and foxy can't love..he's a robot. -_-' But, I do like the art style..just, please, do not make her a Mary Sue...like, make an actual animatronic?
I made an Oc called Sam The Spider..he's just a robot, a spider robot, nothing special his colors are simple, just grey and black with a hat and red scarf. Not barfing rainbows..
K done with advise and questions. Thank you for your time.

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en-yufuin In reply to MebtheMebling1112 [2015-08-20 23:12:45 +0000 UTC]

ok nwn  i will answer questiones

1. titans are from attack on titan, they trapded humanes in the walls!
2. i might do that since i've been told more than once
3. love stick is from binan koukou chikyuu bouei-bu love! it is a very funny magical boy show
4.see below
5.ok

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jitsu-senpai [2015-08-15 05:02:41 +0000 UTC]

WHYYYY

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en-yufuin In reply to jitsu-senpai [2015-08-15 06:10:55 +0000 UTC]

??eh? what happen

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jitsu-senpai In reply to en-yufuin [2015-08-15 06:30:29 +0000 UTC]

//sorry wrong pic

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en-yufuin In reply to jitsu-senpai [2015-08-15 06:32:31 +0000 UTC]

oh okay

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ReaperMC1217 [2015-08-15 04:30:17 +0000 UTC]

I'm going to barf rainbows and have them bleed from my eyes after a full day of seeing these Bloom Luna OCs. Please kill it. I just want more darkness in my life

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ReaperMC1217 In reply to ReaperMC1217 [2015-08-15 04:51:13 +0000 UTC]

I fucking hate anime, how is FNaF even related to anime? I want a more.... Horror themed animatronic, you do know that Five Nights at Freddy's is a Horror game right? I can't pronounce 80% of the description. I..... just want a decent OC. I know you'll call me mean but Holy fucking fuck this OC is the definition of what I hate!

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en-yufuin In reply to ReaperMC1217 [2015-08-15 06:10:22 +0000 UTC]

? anime is style ofdraw i dont want to make her 2edgy though

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ReaperMC1217 In reply to en-yufuin [2015-08-15 06:29:54 +0000 UTC]

Lil' more edgy would be greatly appreciated, or it can just be in an AU, I've had enough internet for today *Falls over and bleeds rainbows*
EDIT: the rainbows are a joke m'kay

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ReaperMC1217 In reply to ReaperMC1217 [2015-08-15 06:34:01 +0000 UTC]

I didn't know you were Japanese so I feel pretty bad for my outburst. And you seem like a nice person so CAKE!
 

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catstitches [2015-08-14 23:18:41 +0000 UTC]

is this real

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en-yufuin In reply to catstitches [2015-08-15 00:42:07 +0000 UTC]

oh and thank for watche!!!!!

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catstitches In reply to en-yufuin [2015-08-15 00:46:23 +0000 UTC]

np!

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en-yufuin In reply to catstitches [2015-08-15 00:37:06 +0000 UTC]

? ofcourse you are not dreaminge you see it really xD

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bibarel-chan [2015-08-14 20:33:49 +0000 UTC]

Those colors are gonna murder the children's eyes.

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en-yufuin In reply to bibarel-chan [2015-08-14 23:05:31 +0000 UTC]

? i think they aregood but maybe i shouldn't use max saturation thenne :/

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bibarel-chan In reply to en-yufuin [2015-08-14 23:20:20 +0000 UTC]

yeah
just tone them colors down and jesus christ that desc makes me cringe

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