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Description What's this? New OC's? Ender.... you need to STOP!
I'm not sorry... 
Hello everyone! And say hello to 2 new OC's! Well, really 2.
Actually... 1 COMPLETELY new OC, one has been mentioned, but never seen.
Let's start out with the one you already know: Twisty-Two. The double-horned unicorn.
If you want to know somethings about her, here it is: Twisty-Two  Because I am too lazy to catch y'all up.
Something that you may not know, is that Twisty comes to her friends for comfort. They are really the only ponies she can talk too without a stutter. They know almost everything about Twisty. (Including her struggles to get Moony to notice her) [AND SHE PASSED] (Which worries them)
Anyway, time for newbies! 
Feather Duster: If you paid enough attention and have good memory, you would recall that Feather Duster is Count Darkula's private maid. She LOVES working for Master Darkula. Maybe a bit too much. XP TIME FOR LE RANDOM FACTZ
 Even though she is Darkula's private maid, she does serve for the bat brothers too, though they don't like her serving them out of kindness.  
 She began working for Darkula at the age of 17, after a broken relationship. She an away from her home (Vanhoover) and moved sailed to Transilmanenia. She admits it was extreme on her end, but she is quite naive and stuck-up. After arriving in the country of the bats, she found a place of comfort: the abandoned Transilmanenia cemetery. Spooky... She ended up being homeless for a few weeks but cleaned off the old gravestones. She took the most care of a grave marked Madam Illusion Vleermuis. She would clean in and leave flowers for the resting pony, and she was eventually found by Count Darkula, the husband of Illusion. He offered her a home and a job which she gladly accepted.  
 Despite being a maid, she is treated like a member of the family. Darkula is actually kinder to her, than he is to his own son, SunBite.  
 After spending years serving the Vleermuis, she has developed two knew things. Feelings for Darkula (even though he was married and still loves Illusion) and a taste for blood.  
 She met Twisty when she overheard her talking about BloodMoon. She asked a few questions (for his safety) and discovered how nervous and sweet she was. She also took to consideration her 2 horns and her stutter. She eventually knew that Twisty meant no harm to the Vleermuis, let alone BloodMoon. She didn't know whether or not the double horned unicorn was being honest. She, out of stupidity, decided to trust her. It was the best stupid choice she made in her whole life. They began to meet one another more times, and Twisty's stutter got better with time. She 
Needle Work: Needle Work sometimes has a prickly personality but she loves her friends flaws and all!
 Despite her messy mane, she is quite neat and tidy and freaks out when things aren't organized.   
 Her dream is to become a famous fashion designer, like Rarity. Unlike Rarity though, she isn't a drama queen. She is kind and loves to help others out.  But besides designing, she loves to sing. Rara being her inspiration.  
 No one really notices her work, besides her best friends, and despite how many times she entered her designs in a fashion magazine, or a fashion show, she always gets rejected by everyone. Photo Finish, Hoity Toity, Tenderhoof, even Rarity herself. But the one pony who rejected her fashion, that also crushed her, was Fashion Plate.  KILL IT WITH FIRE!!!!   
 She's not so good with a sewing machine, because she tends to mess everything up, she sews her dresses and clothes by hoof, which takes forever, but worth it. Every stitch she does is made from a lot love.  That's her clothing line "Needle Work: Every Stitch Made With Love!"  
 She actually comes from a poor family. She has a sick mother, and a father serving the military. She also has 3 younger siblings, all too young too work. She tries to sell dresses, seeing that it is their only way to make money as of right now. She works hard and makes little cash, but it's enough to sustain their family. She just wishes it's enough to give her mother the medical help she needs.  
 She stumbled into Feather Duster and Twisty in the park one windy day. She had returned from a failed attempt to sell a hat to a mare who was looking for one to attend a party with. One gust of wind caused it to slip from her hooves and the next thing she knew, she was chasing after it. Thankfully, someone managed to catch it... with their face. That someone was Twisty. She apologized sincerely for the inconvenience and begged for the hat back, saying she worked really hard on it, it was expensive, and she didn't want to lose it. Twisty began to stutter, so Feather Duster spoke instead. She gladly returned it with a smile and told her it was a beautiful hat. Needle Work smiled and really appreciated the compliment. She was about to depart from the pair before Twisty asked how much the hat would cost if she were to buy it, without a stutter. Almost shocked, she told her the honest price, 20 bits. Twisty paid 30. After that Feather Duster requested to purchase a hat or something like it. One event led to another and the next thing you knew...

They were the 3 Unicorn Musketeers!       

More will be explained.... in the official bios coming out soon....
Along with...
EVERY OC I PROMISED TO MAKE ONE FOR....

*Falls in French*

Twisty was an OC I made up, but...
Needle Work and Feather Duster were adopted by Abigail716  

And I tend to fix Needle Work's mane a little, maybe add some lines or a purple to make it pop more.
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Comments: 37

Indignite [2020-08-28 23:03:14 +0000 UTC]

I really need to draw feather duster one day, her colors are so pretty :,0

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EnderGurl22 In reply to Indignite [2020-12-01 19:38:07 +0000 UTC]

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Kylacloughley [2017-12-14 03:39:27 +0000 UTC]

Though I would play with a diffrent mane style for needle work to me its a bit off. Though her personality ad colors work well in my opinion! 

Featherduster story has me like <3 how orignal and adorabe!

I would've never considered a double horned pony that is definitely new in my eyes I like that! Plus the colors pose and personality is so cute I honestly could see her and feather as an actual character in mlp feather in a Halloween special and twisty probably with zecora! Witch spinning into au's I bet woukd be quite easy!

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EnderGurl22 In reply to Kylacloughley [2017-12-14 03:53:43 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much for the feedback, my friend. I appreciate all types of criticism, and these really help me. So for that, I thank you.

Needle Work's mane style does need to change, I have been working on that, but coming up with a good style to fit her personality is rather challenging. And I also think I should add some purple to it, what do you think? Feel free to hand over some tips, I'm always up for suggestions.

Feather Duster is a character that I really didn't know what to do with at first. She just kinda existed for a while with no purpose, and when I came up with her backstory, I feared some people would claim it to be boring or unoriginal, so I appreciate that you consider it unique. ^^ Truly, I thank you.

And Ms. Twisty, the double-Horned unicorn, is a species I have never seen before. I have seen unicorns with a broken horn, but never with two horns. I'm not saying I came up with the idea, because I'm sure somewhere in the world, someone came up with the idea. Still, I like the thought of it! 
I really appreciate that you think Feather and Twisty could be real mlp characters in the show! 
Thank you yet again! ^^

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Kylacloughley In reply to EnderGurl22 [2017-12-14 04:27:33 +0000 UTC]

Your welcome!

Maybe add some mre curls and make the mane a little longer(if your going for a more messy up do deal?the ponytail works but a few more lines would definitely help make the hair. Hmm if you add a purple id say it would deff have to be a pinky purple I feel a bluish purple would look off.

Hopefully this is helpful!

Of course if I like something I will at min give a fave!

Im saying she is definitely unique because I havntt come across anther pony similar and who knows maybe you did come up with a new thing!

Normally I dont see pony oc's that would fit into the show that well besides a few people. Since I saw ths I fiured id say since most seem to have the stigma"well mine wrks because" when over half the time yor like....actualllly I dont...see it I know there your children but if you ask my opinion I will give it xD! So yes definitely see them in there!

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EnderGurl22 In reply to Kylacloughley [2018-07-17 22:51:59 +0000 UTC]

Years later...
I will take your advice into consideration my friend! Curls and more lines would be perfect! Thank you! I tested the purple and blue in her mane, and you were right. The blue looked weird. I decided to go with a softer pink accompanied with a lavender purple. :3

I really appreciate the kind words! When I make OC's I want them to be unique, not something that has been already done 50 times. And I know how you feel when I see OC's and how people defend them

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Kylacloughley In reply to EnderGurl22 [2018-07-17 23:33:01 +0000 UTC]

Lol your okay I had originally forgot but glad you took my advice into consideration!

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EnderGurl22 In reply to Kylacloughley [2018-07-17 23:48:39 +0000 UTC]

I did, and thank you! When I draw her again, I will use my new design for her! Thanks once more ^^

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Kylacloughley In reply to EnderGurl22 [2018-07-17 23:55:22 +0000 UTC]

You should tag me if like to see when you do!

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EnderGurl22 In reply to Kylacloughley [2018-07-18 00:46:00 +0000 UTC]

Only if you are okay with it!

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Kylacloughley In reply to EnderGurl22 [2018-07-18 00:58:21 +0000 UTC]

Yup I'm good even if it takes awhile xD

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EnderGurl22 In reply to Kylacloughley [2018-07-18 02:19:06 +0000 UTC]

Thanks mate

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colt687 [2017-11-19 22:34:53 +0000 UTC]

Three adorable unicorn ≧∇≦

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EnderGurl22 In reply to colt687 [2017-11-19 23:50:09 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! >w<
They are adorable!

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LennyStendhal13 [2017-11-19 22:32:18 +0000 UTC]

AAAAA they're cuuute! Twistyyyy nice seeing you again  

Mm, Feather Duster, a non-bat pony living with bat ponies and slowly "adopting" their traditions: that's interesting! (Only...what do you mean she has developed a taste for blood? hehe ) Her design is really cute and I find it very brave for her to move so far from her hometown without anything (Also, did you make up the names "Vanehoover" and "Transilmaneia"? If you did then, wow, they're original!). I imagine how Darkula must have felt when he found this mare cleaning his beloved wife's tomb, a mare who didn't know anything about her and yet put so much effort in making her grave look good: no surprise he offered her a place where to live

Needle Work has an original colour scheme ^^ She reminds me a bit of myself: her skills aren't perfect, but what she lacks in technique she recovers in passion

Wow, now you have a real army of OCs!    I think you are starting to infect me Remember that 3D pony generator I discovered thanks to you? Wellll...I kind of got carried away and basically created a ton of wannabe OCs So now I'm trying to develop a particular project: basically, I'm going to transfer their digitalized versions on paper, adding some original details to really "make those characters mine". Then I though it would be nice to start develop their personalities, by writing some short stories about them (I've never really written any story in English so I'll be experimenting a lot I just hope it won't be a disaster). And when writing, I'll let their aspect inspire me: like, why do they look like that? What experiences shaped them? I think it would be fun Probably I won't keep all of the concepts, but I already like some of the ones I started to develop.
So this just to let you know that you inspired me and keep inspiring me a lot Thank chu (And also to specify that if something goes wrong and DeviantArt gets invaded by thousands of LennyCharacters in two days, then I'm not the only one to blame MUAHAHAHAHA  lol just kidding

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EnderGurl22 In reply to LennyStendhal13 [2017-11-21 04:09:20 +0000 UTC]

 :“I-it’s n-nice to see y-you too, L-Lenny!”
LOL when you live with a family of bloodsuckers for a number of years, you realize you have 2 choices. You can either join them and feast on the blood of the innocent… or do the right thing and tell the Vleermuis family that they don’t need to harm ponies for their… juice ^^  

Of course, she picked the wrong choice… Good job Feather Duster!   

She is a brave pony when it comes to protecting the Vleermuis family, but she was more blinded by hatred than anything at that point in time. And sadly I didn’t make up the name Vanhoover, but I did make up” Transilmaneina” and another one “Amareica”. Vanhoover was mentioned in the show  

Darkula may be a heartless bat pony but his wife meant the world to him when she was alive. Back then, he actually smiled. When she died, he thought his wife would be forgotten in the world, and his heart turned black. So I agree with you, when he saw Ms. Duster clean her grave, he felt like his wife was still loved by ponies, even though she knew nothing about Illusion. I guess you can say he was reminded that there still was love and good in the world     


I feel like Needle Work’s colors were a bit too bright, but thanks for the comment about that!  

And that right there is poetic. She isn’t the best around, but she loves what she does. Plus she does it for a good cause.  When you do something you love, it doesn’t matter how good you are, you’ll shine brighter than any star!  
This is only the beginning, my friend! Only the beginning! I have OC’s that you haven’t seen yet, but I drew! They exist!

We all create OC’s that we aren’t so cure would be good enough to share with the world. But we never forget them! Trust me, Gears wouldn’t be a real pony of mine if I had never thrown away his first sketch. When I first entered the Brony Community and discovered OC’s, I made like 20 different OC’s and most of them aren’t even shown (Cuz I threw them out they were so bad XD) (Princess Ender took me like 5 tries to get her perfect)  Oh! I am excited to see them! Fresca and Stendhal need some new friends! (And Stendhal needs someone else to wash the dishes)  And I would love to hear stories about them! I bet it would be amazing! And don’t worry my friend, anything you make is never a disaster! It’ll be amazing, trust me!  

Ah yes, include their looks and explain why they are like that. It can help develop personalities to a character! I am excited to see the ones you come out with! Who knows, I might get inspired to make NEW OC’s MUAHAHA!!! I think I have a problem XD
I am overfilled with joy that I inspire amazing people, like you, with everything I put my heart and soul into! Thank you for saying that! It means so much to me!   

 O_O I’ll call Ghost Busters if anything goes wrong XP Just kidding!  

Though… why do I have a feeling that Fresca would be the leader of the Lenny Army…
                                                                     

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LennyStendhal13 In reply to EnderGurl22 [2017-11-21 22:47:48 +0000 UTC]

Yaaay, way to go Feather Duster! Well, tastes are tastes haha

Our OCs will conquer the world!   "When there's something strange in the NEIGHbourhood...who you gonna call?" Nobody. NO. BODY Because not even Ghostbusters will stop us Thank you for your support if everything goes as planned I'll be able to upload my first new OCs next weekend. And of course Fresca will be the boss

Fresca: "Did you hear Stendhal? New OCs! You will no longer have to clean the dishes!"
Stendhal: "Finally! Thank Goodness! 
Fresca: "You deserve a promotion: from today you are the crew's official SPOON CLEANER!"
Stendhal: "....yayy..."

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EnderGurl22 In reply to LennyStendhal13 [2017-11-24 21:09:35 +0000 UTC]

XD YESHHHHHHHHH!
An Army of OC's that not even Princess Celestia can stop! 

And poor Stendhal XD Well better than having to scrub the pots and pans....

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LennyStendhal13 In reply to EnderGurl22 [2017-11-24 23:26:00 +0000 UTC]


Stendhal: *sigh* "I guess so..."

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EnderGurl22 In reply to LennyStendhal13 [2017-11-25 00:24:48 +0000 UTC]

XD

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Abigail716 [2017-11-19 15:13:50 +0000 UTC]

Ahhhh they look soooo cute!!

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EnderGurl22 In reply to Abigail716 [2017-11-19 17:52:41 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! Its about time I featured them! They were well done, so thank you!

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Abigail716 In reply to EnderGurl22 [2017-11-19 18:35:26 +0000 UTC]

:3

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HarveyPegasus [2017-11-19 06:54:47 +0000 UTC]

Live with a Vampire for a few years
develop taste for blood
...

Seems legit..

But no seriously they're all really cute! I love their designs and personality. Needle Work can design clothing for me anytime (cause drawing cothing for horses is really difficult apparently XD) And I hope FD goes back to her family again!
Very well done Endy!

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EnderGurl22 In reply to HarveyPegasus [2017-11-19 18:26:39 +0000 UTC]

LOL Completely legit....

And you can guarantee that Needle Work will make you some fine clothes. Maybe a scarf or a leather jacket! 
Thank you!
And I think Feather Duster found herself a better family XD

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HarveyPegasus In reply to EnderGurl22 [2017-11-19 20:21:25 +0000 UTC]

Sounds awesome!
But still FD should still say hi to them

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EnderGurl22 In reply to HarveyPegasus [2017-11-19 21:11:26 +0000 UTC]

I guess they need a family reunion

I mean what better way to return to your family than to say that you found a job serving a bat pony with little mercy


 

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HarveyPegasus In reply to EnderGurl22 [2017-11-19 21:54:22 +0000 UTC]

Good point

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EnderGurl22 In reply to HarveyPegasus [2017-11-19 22:53:25 +0000 UTC]

XD

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frosty-cupcak3 [2017-11-19 06:02:56 +0000 UTC]

They all look great. Trust me Ender, you can never make enough OCs. But my favorite of them is definitely Twisty Two.

I love the art and stories for each of them.

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EnderGurl22 In reply to frosty-cupcak3 [2017-11-19 17:53:40 +0000 UTC]

Thanks Frosty! I too love Twisty!
Maybe it's because I drew her more than any of the 3 featured OCs

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Interdemensional [2017-11-19 05:46:51 +0000 UTC]

seems legit

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EnderGurl22 In reply to Interdemensional [2017-11-19 17:50:56 +0000 UTC]

LOL Thanks for checking it out  XD

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Interdemensional In reply to EnderGurl22 [2017-11-19 20:41:16 +0000 UTC]

mo prob

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EnderGurl22 In reply to Interdemensional [2017-11-19 21:09:42 +0000 UTC]

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Interdemensional In reply to EnderGurl22 [2017-11-20 09:06:09 +0000 UTC]

I'd get one but chances are I won't use it, but good art tho

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EnderGurl22 In reply to Interdemensional [2017-11-21 05:04:21 +0000 UTC]

Thanks mate!

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