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Published: 2014-03-19 16:02:19 +0000 UTC; Views: 132; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 0
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Description Break the windows,
Pull up all the floor boards,
Rip out the cords.

The house that was
In my small, swollen heart
Was now torn apart.
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19andMugsy [2014-03-31 00:27:09 +0000 UTC]

  

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brettprince [2014-03-22 03:17:25 +0000 UTC]

ohh and all poems are not free verse hence the types of poetry

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brettprince [2014-03-22 03:15:32 +0000 UTC]

ok well you should look up more on haikus before you go telling other people that they don't have to be three lines or a total of 17 syllables Traditional haiku consist of 17 on (also known as morae), in three phrases of 5, 7 and 5 on respectively
en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Haiku maybe everyone else is wrong though

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EndlessScript In reply to brettprince [2014-03-22 15:27:04 +0000 UTC]

So what exactly do you want me to reply to you to make you stop commenting on my poems.

And if you even read the description... I know this poem is shitty. I don't really need you telling me that it is... BECAUSE I ALREADY FUCKING KNOW.

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brettprince In reply to EndlessScript [2014-03-22 16:43:01 +0000 UTC]

all im saying is that its not a haiku

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EndlessScript In reply to brettprince [2014-03-22 15:22:53 +0000 UTC]

dude, I never said anything about 17 syllables. And I never even said you were wrong.

Also I find it funny how you started commenting on one of my poems by saying that it was lame and NOW after you had nothing to go off of decided to go to my other poems and try to bring more shit into this. It's quite petty of you.

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brettprince In reply to EndlessScript [2014-03-22 16:41:49 +0000 UTC]

hmmm yet you keep it going?

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brettprince [2014-03-19 23:35:01 +0000 UTC]

Here are a few examples of Haiku poetry written by children from around the world. 


In early morning
My Dad goes out for seafood
From the ocean rocks 
Agnes Thomas / Age 13 / Canada 

In the evening twilight
Only the mushrooms 
Are illuminated 
Keji Baba / Age 12 / Japan 

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EndlessScript In reply to brettprince [2014-03-20 17:10:11 +0000 UTC]

What is your point exactly?

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brettprince In reply to EndlessScript [2014-03-20 18:44:14 +0000 UTC]

Ive made myself clear and i commented on three of your "poems" not all of them and i simply wanted to show you a haiku it is three lines not six and they are usually about nature not human nature thats a senryu which is also three lines i think i could be wrong though because i only write free verse

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EndlessScript In reply to brettprince [2014-03-21 23:29:58 +0000 UTC]

A haiku doesn't have to be three lines. You're right they usually are about nature, but whatever. I guess. But honestly I really don't care about what type of poem it is. ;D

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