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enigma-theory — Anathema
Published: 2010-01-30 17:06:41 +0000 UTC; Views: 451; Favourites: 15; Downloads: 4
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What is this?This antagonistic energy ridding me of all accomplishments,
This menacing exertion forcing denial upon me,
Attempting to have me cower before it,
Provoking my mind,
Manipulating my behaviour,
I Dwell on thoughts deliberately secluded from myself.
I am belittled,
Encaged I remain,
I dare not acquire the contentment I deserve.
Proclaiming the rancid factor of my being,
I despise it.
What is this?
This essence creating unbearable misplacement,
This presence advocating unease,
Feeding on my vulnerability,
Awakening my darkest side,
Desperately wanting me to seek refuge.
I am tortured; tormented,
Impossible to escape,
It digs deeper and deeper into my core,
Forever trying to revert what i once was,
I despise it.
What is this?
This level of consciousness conflicting my mind contrary to my will,
This mental state draining one of themselves,
It is exhausting.
Just leave; let me be,
Let me live; I must,
Let me be care free; like children,
Let me believe; in me.
Inability;
It chose to shatter my thoughts,
Removing all positivity,
Intoxicating any good in me,
I despise it..
I despise it..
Still; it will never strip me of my faith.
Comments: 4
It's wonderful. The only thing I would suggest is using another word for energy in the 3rd line since you used it in the 2nd line. That's it.
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thank u 
thanks again
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It chose to shatter my thoughts,
Removing all positivity,
Intoxicating any good in me,
I despise it..
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