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Published: 2012-06-17 10:48:20 +0000 UTC; Views: 888; Favourites: 17; Downloads: 6
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Such is her beauty..That perplexes the mind and embodies the soul,
A celestial vision that compels adoration.
And such is her beauty..
That condones a vortex of allure,
Of which evokes longing of her rapture.
And such is her beauty..
That emanates my fury for lust,
To beseech her the thrill of ecstasy.
Amorous;
Enamoured;
Impassioned;
Infatuated..
Tracing her silhouette,
Exploring her constitution,
Warmth radiating beneath my fingertips,
I discover my euphoria.
Comments: 26
CrimsonSeijun0 [2012-06-27 04:49:56 +0000 UTC]
This was awesome! It touched my in a way *Wink Wink*
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enigma-theory In reply to CrimsonSeijun0 [2012-06-27 05:25:10 +0000 UTC]
hehe thanks, and care to explain?
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CrimsonSeijun0 In reply to enigma-theory [2012-06-27 05:44:09 +0000 UTC]
Well, first part of my comment is a giggle at the sexuality of the piece. More importantly, it is a nod to the imagery presented, and the skill it took to do so. Though, that is the norm with you dear.
I honestly like how this was done, I've been there. I think I've got a couple like that in the gallery... somewhere. lol
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enigma-theory In reply to CrimsonSeijun0 [2012-06-28 03:24:35 +0000 UTC]
hahaha well its still a response to my work none the less and thank you! I should stalk your gallery soon... *cheeky grin*
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CrimsonSeijun0 In reply to enigma-theory [2012-06-28 12:39:21 +0000 UTC]
Heh, I so love the way you think.
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enigma-theory In reply to CrimsonSeijun0 [2012-07-02 13:58:05 +0000 UTC]
Hehe thanks, I developed it myself
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Compiux [2012-06-18 15:27:18 +0000 UTC]
Yep... that's her, too bad is not for me.
Beautiful poem, and about time you posted something
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enigma-theory In reply to Compiux [2012-06-19 10:30:37 +0000 UTC]
hehe thank uuuuuuuuu ^_^ hopefully I'll have some more up soon, ive all of a sudden become in the mood to write again
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enigma-theory In reply to callerofcrows [2012-06-19 10:30:48 +0000 UTC]
thank you very much
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callerofcrows In reply to enigma-theory [2012-06-19 11:21:38 +0000 UTC]
You're very welcome!
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DarkCloudAssasin [2012-06-18 06:55:13 +0000 UTC]
That is wonderfully written. Beautiful words. It touches the heart and makes you say "I want to find my euphoria."
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enigma-theory In reply to DarkCloudAssasin [2012-06-18 07:47:22 +0000 UTC]
thank you! Means a lot and I'm glad you like it
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enigma-theory In reply to Mistresssilverlake [2012-06-18 07:47:46 +0000 UTC]
thank you very much ^_^
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Mistresssilverlake In reply to enigma-theory [2012-06-18 19:23:05 +0000 UTC]
your very welcome ^.^
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Dramira-Official [2012-06-17 13:58:39 +0000 UTC]
Loved it!
Definitely made me think of my character, Dramira. I wish I had talent like you and could express the effect of her beauty in such a way.
Beautiful poem!
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enigma-theory In reply to Dramira-Official [2012-06-18 07:48:56 +0000 UTC]
aww thank you very much! I'm glad you like it. What is your character for?
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Dramira-Official In reply to enigma-theory [2012-06-18 15:34:28 +0000 UTC]
All original, novels, stories.
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enigma-theory In reply to Dramira-Official [2012-06-19 10:33:58 +0000 UTC]
thats pretty awesome ^_^
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jul320 [2012-06-17 11:03:49 +0000 UTC]
I love the word euphoria. Such an intense word. Nice writing.
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