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I thought I'll never be able to finish this. Only because I kept changing the dialogue over and over again because it was starting to become a book than a comic. I didn't want a wall of text scare people off, but man, Naruko can tallllkkk when she is pisssed. I hope it isn't too preaching. More to come!
Naruto world created by Misashi Kishimoto
Art/Story By Enock
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Whoa, Naruko gained some bad ass genjutsu skills
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Wow, you are really good with the dialogue and understanding the characters.
It's good because, it was hard for me to read and think too.Ā Because it made me think of a problem I have.Ā This comic helps me think of what I need to do, and what I have done wrong.
You are very talented.Ā All your comics are great.Ā I'm glad I was able to read this and appreciate what you created.Ā Thank you for drawing and writing this.Ā Ā
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This is really good
Yes hit her
So her being a adult is being kinda rude
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Ah yes this is super well done. A bit of a mean wake up call to Sakurai but also compassion to make her a better character and showing her better parts.
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Just... wow. Seeing from Naruko's... no, YOUR perspective, I can see why you hated how Sakura turned out so much. And honestly, I can't blame you. I blame Kishimoto for not knowing how to write a girl as a strong character. And to be honest, I'd have loved to see Sakura become a stronger character. Maybe I'll remember this when I'm trying to write my own stories.
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I'm just super disappointed, that's all. like I don't mind characters having flaws. For me, that's the best part about them because you can bring a lot of story out from them to work on. Readers WANT to see the struggle because they feel it too and they want to be with them when they change to something better. But...it's sad because Sakura never got the chance to really grow. I understand why fans hated Sakura, but a lot of times people forget that she only a teenager and not a full experience adult yet. That's the time when teenagers make a lot of mistakes to learn from before they better themselves into their adult. It gives us the before/after effect. But Sakura stop growing after the war and remain a teenager in her adult years. That's sad.Trap forever in her selfish delusion of Sasuke. It's not just her though, it's everyone else in that ending. No one settled nothing beside pop out kids because Shounen Jump wants to keep going.
Now, don't get me wrong, I understand Kishimoto had to fight with his editors a lot and have tense schedule to write a story in a short period of time, but I find that his mistake was writing more characters when he should've stick the ones he already had. (And taking Hunterxhunter plot story didn't help either. I'm not ignoring that.) As well if he place more thought into the clans past would effect character's background and attitude. Everything links and puzzled together beautifully if he had work on more of the world, the characters.
That's where My Hero Academia has done right. The creator focus on the class at hand and work the flaws of the world. Even though they are teenagers, they are learning as they grow. Best part, from each other. Like Katsuki Bakugo can be such a dick, we later find out there is more to him. He slowly grows more compassion as the battle goes on. I wanted Sakura to do the same and turn into Ochaco Uraraka. Ochaco push her feelings aside to become stronger. She won me over. That's what people were hoping for for Sakura, but never got.
Sorry, I kinda went on a rant...didn't mean too. Like I said...I'm just disappoint....
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Hey, we all need to vent or rant sometimes. It's fine.
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This speaks to canon Sakura so much it's not even funny.
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Now that's a pep talk. Love the broken mirror imagery here for Sakura.
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Welcome back! Great to see you finished this, given it really is a great story you written and drew. I like that what you done here with Sakura, given she did not grow out of her obession with Sasuke. If she can just move on, she can become a powerful kunoichi, just like Tsunade. I see Inner-Sakura has awaken, thus Sakura's true journey will begin now.
So well done! Love the whole thing!
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Can we just have a pic of that whole Kurama mode Naruko 
But also, great page too!
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