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Published: 2014-05-17 21:45:19 +0000 UTC; Views: 98; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 0
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A girl was born in a quaint little town
Where she would work at the mill and her father would frown
For her beauty surpassed all of her peers
And her father had harbored the regular fears

But the darkest secret of this far-off place
Came to light when light left a traveler's face
And the girl would walk up, a seductive grin
And the father would come and bash his face in.

And the young little girl soon learned what to do
When someone displeased, she said, "I do"

And when her father would come, eyes all a-blazing
The poor young boy or girl was lost to his crazing
And for a couple of years, this worked for the girl
But then she got lonely, and her heart would unfurl

She would flee the house to see her boy dance
And the father would watch for a seductive glance
It never came, but the father still watched
But then one day, the couple was caught

And the boy was never seen again
The father finally pleased again
The girl hanging from the fan.

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Comments: 5

TurtlesForLife [2014-05-17 21:49:38 +0000 UTC]

Did her father murder his daughter and his son-in-law?

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entropyintrovert In reply to TurtlesForLife [2014-05-17 21:53:55 +0000 UTC]

Every time. Yeah.
Basically that one was going in a totally different direction when I started.
But the father would kill all the guys or girls the girl "liked".
And then this backfired.
In the biggest sense of the word.

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TurtlesForLife In reply to entropyintrovert [2014-05-17 21:55:57 +0000 UTC]

O_O Damn.

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entropyintrovert In reply to TurtlesForLife [2014-05-17 21:57:27 +0000 UTC]

ya.
that's where the title came from

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TurtlesForLife In reply to entropyintrovert [2014-05-17 21:59:40 +0000 UTC]

Cool. * melts *

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