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Thought it was time to introduce her to everyone. She was the biggest Mary-Sue when I first created her. Ugh.When she was old enough, she enrolled for a opportunity to join the scientific team on Planet Vort but got promptly rejected with a reply that she was not skilled enough nor needed in their team. Although quite devastated, she carried on, willing to serve her Empire well in other ways. Deciding to at least be a good soldier for the Empire, Nae remained as a faithful Irken Elite soldier and continues to this very day.
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Zamayn [2013-08-03 13:04:00 +0000 UTC]
She's so cute! By the way, it's not really a Mary sue, a Mary sue would look like this
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epicdango In reply to Zamayn [2013-08-03 13:11:15 +0000 UTC]
Oh okay, thanks for clearing that up for me.
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MissVoa [2013-02-24 02:24:52 +0000 UTC]
She's cute. Seems to me a LITTLE Mary-Sue like, but I think we have all been there. Just keep working with her story, mess around with different ideas, and you'll get it. Maybe if you add more personality quirks or put her through something traumatic. I'm not saying the idea of a happy-go-lucky irken is bad, but you have keep it balanced.
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epicdango In reply to MissVoa [2013-02-24 02:29:14 +0000 UTC]
NUU MARY-SUE ALERT!
Anyway thank you very much for the feedback, I will indeed try to play around with her story a bit more!
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MissVoa In reply to epicdango [2013-02-24 02:34:36 +0000 UTC]
No prob. I would want the same done for me. My character was actually a pretty big Mary-Sue herself when I first made her.
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epicdango In reply to MissVoa [2013-02-24 03:15:01 +0000 UTC]
Haha, I think every character has gone down the Mary-Sue road at least once.
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AppleBerrySluppie12 [2013-02-24 00:59:16 +0000 UTC]
She seems like the PERFECT charater to put in IZ!!
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GIR9942 [2013-02-23 22:56:58 +0000 UTC]
I think she's awesome! And I really like her design!
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