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Epsilon86 β Allen Walker WIP1
Published: 2007-12-22 17:08:30 +0000 UTC; Views: 3440; Favourites: 120; Downloads: 99
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Hi, this is the edited version of Allen Walker art. He is meant to be Allen walker of Dgray man. But i admit, i kinda fail at doing it.I change his tatoo mark on his face and enlarge his eyes. Make his nose and mouth smaller.
Do you think he look better than the previous one?
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Anyway, i wish to receive more comments before i continue with it.
Starting on Lavi soon. For Lavi, you wish to see him with his hair down or with his bandana on? Cos this is gonna make a huge different.
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looks goo but he looks a little too asian to be a brit. His skins a bit on the dark side too. but he still looks good
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This one is so much better than the previous. *stares at for hours*
Very great work!
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OMG, he looks so much like Tegoshi Yuya from NEWS. But nice work! ^_^
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This art is done base on a picture of Tegoshi YUya. That's explain the similarity. I think he give me Allen feel. With thoes big caring and gentle eyes.
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I must say,I was so impressed by your whole D.gray man artwork that I started watching the anime. Really thank you...with your pics I discover great anime!
Anyway, if you donΒ΄t mind, I have some advice for improvement Allen picture,if you are not satisfied with it even yet:
-maybe you could darken his hair little bit or just add some more shadow, you know,it may emphasize it...
-and maybe his hair should be little bit longer...maybe
-last thing-what about making his whole portrait? Maybe he would look better,if you try to show his whole head,also with whole neck and shoulders...like a bust portrait I think....
These are just tiny notes...maybe it could help you a bit, but I really adore your D.gray man, artwork. You did excellent job,honestly.
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Thanks. I actually drop this Allen walker project. I will redraw everything cos i feel i commit too many mistakes to save this picture. I will base my new art on the latest Clown Crown Allen. With longer hair and i will draw him in the exorcist uniform. But thanks for the advice, i will do my new art keeping your advice in mind!
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perfect! you captured a feeling of innocence in his look very well! I say this looks very much like Allen Walker!
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ooo he's very pretty! i dont think he looks too old.
for criticism, i would blend the darkness up on his lip a bit so its not so much of a bold line in the middle, and make his nostrils flatter rather than vertical? if that makes any sense? as in bring the skin color down to cover the topmost part of the black? and umm.. if anything else maybe a smidge more overall contrast like in the hair.
just my opinion tho. the eyes and colors are very nice. its still lovely as is!
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This version is much better because he looks younger. But I agree with Clotaire about his lips. And I don't like their color - it's looks like make-up, like he uses lipstick. Maybe you could try more natural tone for lips?
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I agree with you! I will try to use a darker tone for his lip.
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Nice hair.Looks natural and flowy.I like the eyes too!But i think think that the lips can be further improved,because the shadow looks too much like a line.I see that you blurred the shadow so that it'll look more natural,but maybe you can give the shadow a shape or darken the upper lip.
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Thanks! Your tips are helpful. I will take in your suggestions!
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You're welcome!Good luck with your works.
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yup looks better and its lips r so yummie..I mean it has good volume on it..
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i LUV LUV LUV it so much.
very well doneXD
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This looks amazing! 
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thanks! I spend quite an effort in drawing his eyes!
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And it really paid off, might I add.
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