Eredev In reply to Thisntme [2013-02-21 01:39:09 +0000 UTC]

I like doing haiku, because the fixed form helps me shape my ideas. And to be completely honest, this isn’t a “real” haiku (for a given definition of real), since I only used the syllable count and on purpose forgot the “cut” and the season reference.

I’m glad you liked it and thanks for the

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Thisntme In reply to Eredev [2013-02-21 01:45:08 +0000 UTC]

I noticed a bit on the 2nd two lines that (be it my way of speaking, or actuality) you kinda had to slur the words a bit to fit the normal 5, 7, 5 syllable count [not even bothering with onji at that point]. More than likely though, it's just me being the illiterate fool I am .
My point being made: I hope you continue being inspired, cause sure as heck I'm having trouble .

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Eredev In reply to Thisntme [2013-02-21 01:59:23 +0000 UTC]

Slurring words is what I do best (I let it slide this time because I really wanted it look like this, normally I’d change it).
I hope you get your inspiration back; I kind of lost mine for a few days but now I got it back.

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Eredev In reply to ShadowAether [2013-02-21 01:29:44 +0000 UTC]

No problem

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Eredev In reply to forty-foursunsets [2013-02-21 01:26:26 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, I like them to, they are the reason I wrote this

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forty-foursunsets In reply to Eredev [2013-02-21 01:29:17 +0000 UTC]

haha

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