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Published: 2004-02-12 11:02:23 +0000 UTC; Views: 400; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 90
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Not really happy about the design, it might need changes.... plz help me and thanx for contribute ideas!!
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Like it alot, reminds me of some of the work by Khang Le
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i really love how mechanical and unathletic it looks .. think you shouldn't change the design
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I wonder if its 100% gray tone marker..seems like there's a light yellow tone on the reflection side.. what color is that Eric?
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Ha... very sharp observation! it's the Brick Beige colour! wanna try one piece on these ??
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wahh...very long didn't hear from you liow. heheh
the robot. hmm.. looks like someone with a beer gut. fat tummy. maybe that's why it's awkward a little. maybe it's the angle of the bot, that the left arm of it looks as if it is part of the body. i like the leg though. very chicken/bird like.
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ps. actually i like the face being not too discernable. it gives it more attitude in fact, and stes him apart from other bot designs
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awesome job once again. you make very unique robotic designs. i don't know if i mentioned this toyou before, but your robots remind me of an apple computer. its as if apple decided to start a line of mechanical humanoids
though this is already a solid design, my suggestions would be to perhaps balance his upper body with his lower body. it seems the head and shoulder areas are a bit too big for the legs to support. but i dunno, could be the prespective.
anyway, this is good stuff. very cool design. great job my friend.
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I really like it. I'd have to say the torso looks a big too long and clunky for the robot to be very mobile, though, and I wish it had a more discernable face. Otherwise, nice design.
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u asked for comment/crit :
1) unmanageable torso twist
2)legs appear too weak to support dead weight top
3)i like the top half, very.. modern 
4)the tummy area.. whats that for? it seems able to fold into itself,, i suppose its like a spine?
all in all, a very nice design, possibly flawed in the workability area, but from an aesthetic point, i dont mind owning one
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From a quasi-technical standpoint, you may want to redesign those legs. They might not be thick enough to support the central mass of the torso. You might also want sturdier moving parts on the legs, i.e. those toes and heels. The arms are a tad bit long and look like they could fall off if it were forced to hold it up at a right angle from the body, so tuck that in...
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I love marker drawings andf this ones no exception
the design does need a few changes - think about its use, and design - or re-design from there
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Great work br0 ................Ok I think it looks a little too low on the C off G........Needs the head a little removed from the body to balance it .........Its like he's pulling his neck in
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Fantastic. I would suggest working on the torso and.. "facial" areas. They seem disproportionate, or perhaps too simple. I'm not sure. =/ The head looks like it's had its face carved off, or something, and it also looks like it can't turn left or right. It looks quite scary, I guess, so.. it's kind of hard to make comments on the mech when I don't know it's purpose.
Good stuff though, keep it up.
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I always love to see mech works rendered this way..loose and expressive rather than tight and ultra-smooth (although there's nothing wrong with that...
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I like this a lot... a lovely style of artwork and a pleasing design
-Rich
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so sory...posted the message to the wrong guy...so sorry.. im new.
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wow wow wow..... . . . great work. I wonder whats the other color tone of marker you used. I dun think its gray tone only right? The reflection side looks a lil warmer, yellowish like. What color is that?
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