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Published: 2005-06-24 11:43:24 +0000 UTC; Views: 708; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 49
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Description This is the poster art of my latest project titled 'Slimmer', software is photoshop. not sure about the time that i'd spent ... coz i finish it within 3 days. Hope to get any feedback and commend, TQ!!!
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Comments: 10

NeoWhitewind [2005-07-01 09:19:10 +0000 UTC]

The words do seem light sensei.

Mebbe make it more 'indented in' to give it darker colour and thus more contrast.

But the concept is nice and cute! XD

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Sandcastle [2005-06-26 08:27:45 +0000 UTC]

Heheh, nice concept for the project title~

Hmm, the words being light... maybe can try putting some 'stronger' cracks to bolden it. Something akin to bordering a word! It might even show the weight related with the title chara.

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AthenaTT [2005-06-26 04:24:34 +0000 UTC]

You are brilliant. This is freaking amazing. Love at first sight. I subscribe to Communication Arts, Electronic Publishing, and a whole slew of other graphic design and print mags... This is the type of caliber of art I see in those professional zines. WOW. I just love it.

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bmxchik [2005-06-24 19:58:13 +0000 UTC]

This is soo good.. simple but really really good!

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dream-tim3 [2005-06-24 17:49:47 +0000 UTC]

feels very prehistoric,id imagine the dude in animal skin n a club...is tat good or bad? =\

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jbryanm [2005-06-24 11:51:09 +0000 UTC]

What to say--I like how the text turned out-very nice job there especially with the cracks. The sweat on the guys head is a nice touch, adds that little bit of detail needed.

Its really great, but after looking at your gallery, I wouldn't expect less.

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ericfoo In reply to jbryanm [2005-06-25 03:28:15 +0000 UTC]

thanx for the C & C, agree with u... i should do more on his sweat, btw... will u suggest the BG be more bluish or remain this color??

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jbryanm In reply to ericfoo [2005-06-27 11:59:47 +0000 UTC]

I like it like this, I was looking at the other "Fat Guy" in your gallery to compare the BGs. For this one, it looks like stone and the letters are carved in it, so the color is good. Maybe if you made it look more like sky, it could be more blue, then the letters could look like clouds---now I'm just going off--I hate to tell people specific things to do with their art. The idea just came to me.

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fates-sieve [2005-06-24 11:44:37 +0000 UTC]

writing is abit light n hard to read but the concept is great. atfirst i thought it spelled 'summer' and went "oh yeah, so true" but i like the slimmer concept as well

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ericfoo In reply to fates-sieve [2005-06-24 11:49:04 +0000 UTC]

Oops, i hardly see the problem after i create it... now i must do something about it.... thank you very`very`very much.... it's really a big help!! LOV YA!!!!

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