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I don't have a real name yet, but for now so there's something to call him I'm calling Claku. I'd appreciate it if anyone were to offer some ideas how to improve it. The idea was basically a strange mishmash of features because it's a large alien creature, segmented body with a stinger, too many legs, four wings arranged somewhat like a dragonfly or bee, and some sort of jaw which stands out from its usually bug-like nature.
I sort of dislike the initial drawing, especially with the way its head turned out rather too human looking. I drew up a few alternates (call the top 1 and the bottom 4) but I'm not sure if any of them are any good.
The scene this thing appears in is mostly written out, I just need some work on its visual presentation.

The creature Claku has a devious, rather cowardly, back-stabbing sort of nature. Taking opponents head on is something it would prefer not to do, preferring to either ambush them or disorientate them and strike from behind.
Combat abilities and notes:
It flies in a highly erratic manner, dodging about constantly, it changes course rapidly but ultimately its straight flight speed is kind of slow.
It has strong regeneration capabilities and can even reattach severed limbs.
It has several vents along its body that can discharge toxic and corrosive gasses, it likes to throw out trails of it to force other fliers into the flight paths it wants them to take.
It can elongate its limbs somewhat, making its effective striking range notably longer than an opponent would guess at first.
The smaller stingers surrounding its main one can be fired as projectiles, all stingers carry a dose of poison.
It can create a phantom image of itself for about 10 seconds leaving the impression that it's gone in two different directions at once.

Description
I don't have a real name yet, but for now so there's something to call him I'm calling Claku. I'd appreciate it if anyone were to offer some ideas how to improve it. The idea was basically a strange mishmash of features because it's a large alien creature, segmented body with a stinger, too many legs, four wings arranged somewhat like a dragonfly or bee, and some sort of jaw which stands out from its usually bug-like nature.
I sort of dislike the initial drawing, especially with the way its head turned out rather too human looking. I drew up a few alternates (call the top 1 and the bottom 4) but I'm not sure if any of them are any good.
The scene this thing appears in is mostly written out, I just need some work on its visual presentation.

The creature Claku has a devious, rather cowardly, back-stabbing sort of nature. Taking opponents head on is something it would prefer not to do, preferring to either ambush them or disorientate them and strike from behind.
Combat abilities and notes:
It flies in a highly erratic manner, dodging about constantly, it changes course rapidly but ultimately its straight flight speed is kind of slow.
It has strong regeneration capabilities and can even reattach severed limbs.
It has several vents along its body that can discharge toxic and corrosive gasses, it likes to throw out trails of it to force other fliers into the flight paths it wants them to take.
It can elongate its limbs somewhat, making its effective striking range notably longer than an opponent would guess at first.
The smaller stingers surrounding its main one can be fired as projectiles, all stingers carry a dose of poison.
It can create a phantom image of itself for about 10 seconds leaving the impression that it's gone in two different directions at once.