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ErikTjernlund β€” Releasing you

Published: 2012-09-25 20:49:08 +0000 UTC; Views: 3461; Favourites: 164; Downloads: 57
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Description Your foul jelly half, of our once combined heart.
I'm releasing, like you already did but with our love.
From me, from us.
All I had left was jelly and heart that you deviously left behind this land.
Wondering though, why it's still your half that's red.
Attempting murder while I was already sick was not wise of you.
Don't really know what I've turned into by your torment.
But we all know the saying from a very smart man.
Whatever doesn't kill you, simply makes you…

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Comments: 56

Ametystical [2012-10-22 13:43:31 +0000 UTC]

This very deep, beatiful and sad

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ErikTjernlund In reply to Ametystical [2012-10-22 13:50:50 +0000 UTC]

Thank You
Nice hearing that from someone as talented as you.

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Ametystical In reply to ErikTjernlund [2012-10-23 12:25:00 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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Zynnanna [2012-10-22 11:50:26 +0000 UTC]

oh get how sad this story is well done

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ErikTjernlund In reply to Zynnanna [2012-10-22 12:18:02 +0000 UTC]

Thank You

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Zynnanna In reply to ErikTjernlund [2012-10-22 12:30:19 +0000 UTC]

your very welcome

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Miss-Zenith [2012-10-10 06:00:58 +0000 UTC]

All this time we've known each other, I've wanted you open up to me. To see this raw message that's obviously intended for that low-life piece of shit displayed for the world to see, I'm almost falling off my seat from giddiness. I'm extremely proud of you for bearing your soul like this. It's all I can do not to fly over to see you now, hold you, and never let you go. She does not deserve your love. She never will. Maybe I don't deserve to have that love either.... But I know I deserve it more than she does. I was there for you when she wasn't. So were all your other friends.

Leave her in the past, Erik. I know it's hard, but she's not worthy of being in your future. It those who made the effort to be there for you that deserve that honour. Xx

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ErikTjernlund In reply to Miss-Zenith [2012-10-10 13:25:29 +0000 UTC]



I will try to answer this the best way I can.
With this video and song:
[link]

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Miss-Zenith In reply to ErikTjernlund [2012-10-13 18:37:55 +0000 UTC]

:-D Then the feeling is mutual!

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ErikTjernlund In reply to Miss-Zenith [2012-10-14 12:57:41 +0000 UTC]

Of Course

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blueMALOU [2012-09-29 19:09:16 +0000 UTC]

Are you a ? YouΒ΄re tearing the heart [link]

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ErikTjernlund In reply to blueMALOU [2012-09-30 18:37:23 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, I was to become one before I became the opposite.

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blueMALOU In reply to ErikTjernlund [2012-09-30 18:49:27 +0000 UTC]

Oh! yea!
[link]

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Conner-Black [2012-09-28 20:50:36 +0000 UTC]

deep, so very deep. Awesome

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shybloodygirl [2012-09-28 19:01:40 +0000 UTC]

so cool !!!!!

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SirenDollofDeath [2012-09-28 13:44:45 +0000 UTC]

This is beautiful conept I can relate but in a diffrent way.

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Sk8ter-Monster [2012-09-28 02:42:19 +0000 UTC]

This is beautiful and sad. I love the concept, a lot can relate.

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jong28 [2012-09-28 00:44:33 +0000 UTC]

awwww..........

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YoshiofRedemption [2012-09-27 22:31:18 +0000 UTC]

This is so touching and sad. The reader truly feels like they're dying from an agonizing broken heart. Well done.

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BHDH [2012-09-27 20:53:43 +0000 UTC]

the "telling you" part is honesty. Don't scorn honesty, for it is a gift.
I told him because I respect him and because he should not be kept in the dark like an unknowing brick in my own little game.

A touching series, I admire the way of saying everything by letting it say itself.
I applaud you
all the best
-BHDH

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ErikTjernlund In reply to BHDH [2012-09-27 21:12:20 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, and you're probably right.

But if a person has the intention to never speak to the other again and knows that the person might be dead soon, it seems alittle psychotic, don't you think? Making the possible healing process even harder.
Though I think it's still 100% egoistic caused by guilt and that the person wants to hurt the other even more just for the pleasure.

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Driony [2012-09-27 15:13:33 +0000 UTC]

Wow .. this is amazing work! .. how did you really do this?

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ErikTjernlund In reply to Driony [2012-09-30 16:41:27 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!
How I made this? You know, jelly and a sick mind.

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Driony In reply to ErikTjernlund [2012-10-01 05:17:02 +0000 UTC]

this is cool

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VividArtistRogue [2012-09-27 14:29:00 +0000 UTC]

Since you actually care about comments, I'd like to say.. This is amazing, and it just... I love it. <3

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ErikTjernlund In reply to VividArtistRogue [2012-09-28 11:40:30 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, this makes me want to continue with stuff like this on this site.

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Pikausul [2012-09-27 13:56:34 +0000 UTC]

This picture of pain really give me some hope... I've been looking for something like this for awhile... I may not be able to say I know how you feel seeing as I was never cheated on, but I to just recently got my heart shattered by someone and I just want my life back... You are very good with photography and you should keep going at what you're doing.

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ErikTjernlund In reply to Pikausul [2012-10-20 09:34:57 +0000 UTC]

sorry for the late Thank You, and I'm glad that you got something out of it, that's after all why I'm doing this.

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Pikausul In reply to ErikTjernlund [2012-10-21 00:31:57 +0000 UTC]

That is quite alright! ^^ You're welcome and that's a good reason to do art C:

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TheAveragePerson [2012-09-27 13:44:54 +0000 UTC]

Your story is very sad. I hve never had my heart shattered before, so I cannot tell you that I know how you feel. Is the story true? If it is, you are a very brave man. Are you really in hospital? If so, would it be too much to ask what happened?

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SincerelyNameless [2012-09-27 02:14:13 +0000 UTC]

Simply and utterly Beautiful! They say a picture is worth a thousand words, your heart pictures are worth the finest of lexis.

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ErikTjernlund In reply to SincerelyNameless [2012-09-27 11:48:33 +0000 UTC]

Wow, Thank You for those kind words.

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SincerelyNameless In reply to ErikTjernlund [2012-09-27 22:54:23 +0000 UTC]

It is my pleasure, Keep up the good work

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GoryBlueCat [2012-09-26 19:52:58 +0000 UTC]

Brilliance once again! ;u;

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ErikTjernlund In reply to GoryBlueCat [2012-09-27 10:22:55 +0000 UTC]

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VPofFantasyland [2012-09-26 15:40:49 +0000 UTC]

God, you really are impressively strong.
I can't find the words to describe the respect and awe I feel for you.

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ErikTjernlund In reply to VPofFantasyland [2012-09-27 09:30:18 +0000 UTC]

And here I thought that I would lose everyone's respect with this one, thanks. ^^

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VPofFantasyland In reply to ErikTjernlund [2012-09-27 20:26:49 +0000 UTC]

No, it's amazing.
I lost most of my friends when I got sick, and I barely had the guts to go on.

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CatCowProduce [2012-09-26 12:43:50 +0000 UTC]

W-was this just a story? Or parts of it? '.' This whole thing... true or not.... looking at each of these made me reach for my own heart e.e .....feeling it writhe around in that pain you've described... If this were a book, it'd only be a couple pages... and its touched me deeper then anything I've read '.' bravo!

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ErikTjernlund In reply to CatCowProduce [2012-09-26 13:02:11 +0000 UTC]

Now when it's all over I want to see it as just a story, thanks very much for those kind words.

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CatCowProduce In reply to ErikTjernlund [2012-09-26 15:16:45 +0000 UTC]

Thats some real cool stuff ^^

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Felixuta [2012-09-26 11:58:11 +0000 UTC]

wow

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ErikTjernlund In reply to Felixuta [2012-09-27 11:51:21 +0000 UTC]

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Felixuta In reply to ErikTjernlund [2012-09-27 11:59:42 +0000 UTC]

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leeman10 [2012-09-26 10:15:38 +0000 UTC]

That's very impressive,but you should overcome it.I mean you really should start looking positive into your future and forget about the past. Keep it up that's a very strong work.

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ErikTjernlund In reply to leeman10 [2012-09-27 11:50:05 +0000 UTC]

Thank You, and you're right, and this was the ending so the brightness can start now.

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hidden-fantasy10 [2012-09-26 09:16:35 +0000 UTC]

Wow...so deep. So much emotion. It's amazing!!

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ErikTjernlund In reply to hidden-fantasy10 [2012-09-27 11:50:22 +0000 UTC]

Thank You

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Revenia [2012-09-26 07:48:58 +0000 UTC]

Great follow up to the series! I just love the idea of jelly hearts.

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ErikTjernlund In reply to Revenia [2012-09-26 08:00:32 +0000 UTC]

Thank You, I'm glad that you think so.
Jelly can be alot of fun.

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