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EscarlataFox — The Clumsy Project: Contest Entry

Published: 2012-05-12 11:55:35 +0000 UTC; Views: 2936; Favourites: 26; Downloads: 19
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Description I was awoken by a loud pounding on my door. Forcing my eyes to open, I fumbled about for my glasses. I'm basically blind without them. Papa smurf calls it "high congenial myopia", or "very nearsighted from birth." I call it a pain in the smurf. I found them and put them on, not even stabbing myself in the eye. I lighted a match and touched the flame to a candle wick, lighting it. With the light from the candle, I checked the time. 5:33. Smurf me. There's only one smurf I know that gets up at this unsmurfy hour. Grumbling a little from the lack of sleep, I walk to the front door of my one- bedroom mushroom house. Bracing myself for a dumb question of some sort, I open the door. Sure enough, there he was: Clumsy Smurf. Complete with baggy trousers, floppy hat, large, awkward feet and longish awkward limbs to match. He had a big grin on his face that stretched almost ear to ear. "Hiya, Brainy!" he said happily.

And such is the opening paragraph which begins act 1 of *dragonmastrcrashrokz 's brilliant Smurf fanfiction, The Clumsy Project.

This is my contest entry for her smurfy contest, in which we are to draw a scene from the fanfiction.

This certainly isn't my favourite scene, but I chose this scene because:
It is one I could picture in my mind clearly exactly how I wanted it
Upon reading The Clumsy Project for the first time, I remember picturing this scene specifically.
Though seemingly insignificant, this is actually an important scene; it is the scene-setter, the introductory image. It's that scene where everything's happy and fine before all of the events start to unfold. The moment of oblivion, when you have no idea what's coming your way; it just seems like another day, even though everything is about to change.

Perhaps, also, this is an image that will be etched into Brainy from this fanfiction's mind for some time to come: him opening the door to his smiling, faithful friend, bright and early in the morning, when everything was fine, nothing was wrong.

If anyone has any suggestions on how I can improve my "smurf anatomy", then please, let me know!

This isn't identical to how I imagined the scene, but I'm happy with it.

The first act of The Clumsy Project can be found here: [link]
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Comments: 42

Wolfmarian [2012-05-24 14:18:49 +0000 UTC]

Its very well done, cute clumsy (and sure if we could look at brainys face he would be not amused xD).

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EscarlataFox In reply to Wolfmarian [2012-05-25 09:18:36 +0000 UTC]

Haha, I'd think it would be sleepy and disgruntled. and a little surprised, even though he knew who would be at the door.

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MahuruRaji [2012-05-13 10:07:11 +0000 UTC]

Wow this turned out great! (I like what you ended up doing with the door ^u^)
It's really nice to see this finished :3 Although I think I'll miss discussing it in maths class! xD

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EscarlataFox In reply to MahuruRaji [2012-05-13 10:08:21 +0000 UTC]

Thanks so much

Ohww, don't worry, we'll discuss more smurf anatomy, I'm sure

Or... you know... it is a MATHS class... we COULD talk about MATHS... XD

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MahuruRaji In reply to EscarlataFox [2012-05-13 10:19:29 +0000 UTC]

Your welcome!

Oh, um yes I suppose so... xD

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EscarlataFox In reply to MahuruRaji [2012-05-13 10:20:54 +0000 UTC]

XD

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smilem0n [2012-05-13 07:42:00 +0000 UTC]

awesome!!!!

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EscarlataFox In reply to smilem0n [2012-05-13 07:48:58 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for the fav

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smilem0n In reply to EscarlataFox [2012-05-13 07:54:26 +0000 UTC]

your welcome
hey, in the masked pie smurfer , what is with baby at the end???
btw way on brainy

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EscarlataFox In reply to smilem0n [2012-05-13 08:31:14 +0000 UTC]

*You're

Baby has natural magical talent

I KNOW!!! I saw that ep aaaages ago

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smilem0n In reply to EscarlataFox [2012-05-13 09:10:55 +0000 UTC]

sorry
really? i guess when baby grows up he'll be magic smurf???
do you see his talent in any other episodes?
and do the smurfs know about it?

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EscarlataFox In reply to smilem0n [2012-05-13 09:15:52 +0000 UTC]

Idk. Maybe he'll be the next Papa; maybe he'll be Sorceror Smurf. Who knows?
READ THE FANFIC I LINKED U DAMMIT XD
I dont know

And Im not sure about that either havent seen enough episodes to know.

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smilem0n In reply to EscarlataFox [2012-05-13 09:28:29 +0000 UTC]


heh heh
I lost them
relink them 2 me?

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EscarlataFox In reply to smilem0n [2012-05-13 10:10:08 +0000 UTC]

[link]

...What am I gonna do with you?!

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smilem0n In reply to EscarlataFox [2012-05-13 10:29:01 +0000 UTC]

thank me for what I'm uploading

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EscarlataFox In reply to smilem0n [2012-05-13 10:40:41 +0000 UTC]

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smilem0n In reply to EscarlataFox [2012-05-14 06:37:38 +0000 UTC]

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dragonmastrcrashrokz [2012-05-13 05:44:24 +0000 UTC]

....................................... LOVE IT

(and I didn't even think about that first scene being so important but now that you mention it, it is )

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EscarlataFox In reply to dragonmastrcrashrokz [2012-05-13 07:14:21 +0000 UTC]

Aww thanks

Though admittedly, upon rereading the paragraph, correct me if I'm wrong: but shouldn't I have depicted Brainy holding that candle you mentioned? Or did he put it down before getting the door...

I tried to make everything dark inside too, to give it that "early morning" feel, and outside bright, but I think I should have made Brainy's clothes darker shades of grey... plus made the sky a LITTLE less bright; the sun would only have just begun to have risen at 5:33... and depending on the season, it might not have risen at all!
(but in my mind it had risen )
(But then again, if there's a candle sitting on a table nearby, that explains the brightness of the inside further )

The walls within houses are usually yellow/light orange, but it's hard to tell how much darker the walls are in the picture; the onlooker could just assume that is their normal colour When I did the lineart, I was frustrated because I thought I'd made Clumsy just the TINIEST bit too small, but I actually really like how he came out in the end! ♥

I had lots of fun with this, and it helped me improve my smurf art significantly. If ONLY I had enough time to submit more entries! If I could, I'd go crazy, girl!
Seriously. You know if I find the time I might just keep drawing more scenes even when the contest is over...

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dragonmastrcrashrokz In reply to EscarlataFox [2012-05-13 07:39:25 +0000 UTC]

you're so welcome

haha, it's ok I forgot about it, to be completely honest that's kinda what I assumed- that he put it down XD

I think it was mid- summer. (so... maybe a little sun, at least ) hmm... I guess the orange is a bit bold, concidering the walls are generally a more neutral color, but it works haha, don't worry, Clumsy looks just fine, not too small or anything actually, according to my how to draw manga books (that have been untouched for awhile... *goes to go reread them...* XD) it's actually pretty accurate

haha, I'm glad you had fun! (honestly, I think you've pretty much got the contest won by default.... )ha, nice! that would be really cool! I'd like to see more scenes in your style

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EscarlataFox In reply to dragonmastrcrashrokz [2012-05-13 07:46:57 +0000 UTC]

Oh, that's good then. he put it down indeed, then

Yeah. I was just making the original bland colours darker, but kinda failed at that huh?

Cool! Accuracy for the win!

Aww. I'm sure more entries will be submitted! If not-well then. XD

Yeah, I'd like to do more scenes too

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dragonmastrcrashrokz In reply to EscarlataFox [2012-05-13 08:15:56 +0000 UTC]

haha, that's my guess, anyways

pssh, it's fine

Yeeah!

I hope so

you should!

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EscarlataFox In reply to dragonmastrcrashrokz [2012-05-13 08:32:06 +0000 UTC]

Well, it is YOUR story, so you must be right! XD

Mmmm...

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dragonmastrcrashrokz In reply to EscarlataFox [2012-05-13 09:12:05 +0000 UTC]

tch, it's got plenty of little plotholes like that, though. it just kinda randomly disappeared XD

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EscarlataFox In reply to dragonmastrcrashrokz [2012-05-13 09:45:07 +0000 UTC]

XD

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Smurfette123 [2012-05-12 23:54:12 +0000 UTC]

Cool!!

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anglekkitty In reply to Smurfette123 [2013-09-18 15:47:42 +0000 UTC]

Brainy was very very Sad because he lost his best friend

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Smurfette123 In reply to anglekkitty [2013-09-20 00:31:28 +0000 UTC]

Yep.

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anglekkitty In reply to Smurfette123 [2013-09-20 20:18:09 +0000 UTC]

        

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EscarlataFox In reply to Smurfette123 [2012-05-13 01:46:21 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much!

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TairusuKU [2012-05-12 23:04:18 +0000 UTC]

cute!

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EscarlataFox In reply to TairusuKU [2012-05-13 01:46:40 +0000 UTC]

thank you!

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Damian-Fluffy-Doge [2012-05-12 18:15:20 +0000 UTC]

aw...cute

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EscarlataFox In reply to Damian-Fluffy-Doge [2012-05-13 01:47:44 +0000 UTC]

Thankyou

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TairusuKU [2012-05-12 17:23:33 +0000 UTC]

cute!!

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EscarlataFox In reply to TairusuKU [2012-05-13 01:47:57 +0000 UTC]

thanks,

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Callme-Char [2012-05-12 16:57:40 +0000 UTC]

Oh my... It's so very cute!!!

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EscarlataFox In reply to Callme-Char [2012-05-13 01:51:29 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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MyFanFictionPicture [2012-05-12 14:14:55 +0000 UTC]

awwww cute!^^

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EscarlataFox In reply to MyFanFictionPicture [2012-05-13 01:51:38 +0000 UTC]

Thanks.

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MyFanFictionPicture In reply to EscarlataFox [2012-05-13 10:43:05 +0000 UTC]

Welcome!

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EscarlataFox In reply to MyFanFictionPicture [2012-05-13 10:44:28 +0000 UTC]

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