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esotericdivinity β€” Sublimity
Published: 2007-05-22 00:16:09 +0000 UTC; Views: 287; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 4
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Description Awake, you sleeper, hope and wake
Do not rush, stumbling as nature’s drunkenness
Submerge yourself in sweet fate’s nectar
Fueled by transcending dreams, bridged from yesterday
Fly with other flightless in airless air
Take these ironies and let them rain
Jostle your conscience, shake your logic
Feel with the soul instead of the mind
And believe in waking to another day
With that same universal mindset
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Comments: 8

esotericdivinity [2007-06-27 18:57:24 +0000 UTC]

lol, I love sappy cliches even when you can see them coming

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SarcasmPersonified [2007-06-27 14:15:22 +0000 UTC]

I would say love, but on this page it appears to be quite a cliche.

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Miraiyu [2007-05-28 02:29:17 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful.

"Good News" epiphany moments are rare. They should be treasured.

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RestlessSands [2007-05-24 23:41:34 +0000 UTC]

it's beautiful, kenji! It's got a touch of wisdom and lots of sentences that turn back on themselves only to add more fully to the whole of the poem.

wonderfully done! - you sometimes make me wonder where you'll go in life . . .

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esotericdivinity In reply to RestlessSands [2007-05-25 00:34:51 +0000 UTC]

Your comment makes my contradictory self quite happy!

Thanks a bundle, and as for where I'll end up, I'm thinking a wandering salesmen who sells useless trinkets.

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Jyueru [2007-05-22 22:18:32 +0000 UTC]

It's short but its has so much Esoter

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Sho-chan9 [2007-05-22 00:54:38 +0000 UTC]

Aww This poem sounds nice Kenji. I love how it flows, and your word choice was perfect.

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esotericdivinity In reply to Sho-chan9 [2007-05-22 03:37:23 +0000 UTC]

aww, why thank you. Your flattery's making me blush...<3

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