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Essande — Giving Up
Published: 2006-03-18 04:48:26 +0000 UTC; Views: 782; Favourites: 24; Downloads: 16
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So I used a tutorial for the background, I didn't know any other way. This is inspired by a dream. Jack's family is having a reunion at some beach and Jack's talking to Megan. Megan gets in the mood to start insulting her cousin and Jack gets angry of course. Then there's a blank in my memory because suddenly the beach is empty and Jack's chucking his goggles out to sea. There's more but it's weird and Omi dressed as a bunny is involved. This is around the point I wake up thankfully...Related content
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If the picture weren't good, I would still have faved this just for the fact that you had a dream like that.
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AWESOME.
I've got "Jack gives up" stories in my mind, too, but I really hope you write yours. ^_^
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Probably not going to happen. I can start things fine but finishing them is a whole different story. Besides, large memory gaps and the complete randomness that tends to fill them would make for a really bad tale.
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Dear, that's why writers need Beta Readers.
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Never had a Beta Reader, not really anyway. I've had my worked critiqued by other students in a creative writing class but they hardly saw problems in my stories, just my poems.
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Yowie. Well, you need to snoop around; see if there's anyone willing to look over your work, and hash it out with them where you want the story to go.
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I might when I have the time. I have three big projects due on the 3rd and I still need to start on two of them.
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cool O_O you have to base a story on that one...you could put chase in too
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Ugh no! I'm okay with original works but keeping other people's characters in character is a major barrier for me. Also I'm lazy so it would never get down if I started it, and due to memory blanks there'd be a plot lack and so many other problems that I'm not even going to dare trying!
Maybe you could try it...
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ARE YOU KIDDING!!!! I would whore it up SO much that the omi-dressed-as-rabbit scene would be...well yeah anyway
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Well really all that scene is The monks trying to cheer Jack up. I have no idea why. It was Kimiko's idea. Omi was wearing one of those pajama bunny suits...
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