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Published: 2012-12-06 22:55:46 +0000 UTC; Views: 18764; Favourites: 126; Downloads: 414
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I'm experimenting with trying to convey the story on the page so there's no need for captions at all. I'm not completely thrilled with the result but it's not bad for a first try, I guess.===========================================
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This is so darn good there's nothing more to say.
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I think the big thing to do a comic style is that you need more frames to show the action. Β The trade of is now the text should only show thoughts and speech. Β The pictures and the readers imagination have to narrate the actions.
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I'm sure you are right, but I've always done photo stories so it's hard for me to abandon the "big blocks of text" mentality.Β That, and shooting and editing the number of pictures I'd need to do a fully-realized comic issue (most DC and Marvel books seem to run ~25 pages) would be time prohibitive for me if I ever wanted to finish.Β But since I rarely finish anything, anyway, it's probably actually the way to go.Β
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Thank you!Β I'm still trying to learn to do comic pages and I feel amateurish at it but I'm happy you liked my attempt!Β
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Never stay away from your site too long,you never know what you miss. Lesson learned.
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I hope in a good way!Β
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I loved the entire story, tailor designing a drug specific to Sentinel is really smart, and probably worked better than expected due to her initial overconfidence...
Its all in the planning, my Bratts would completely agree with your Tranquil
Is there going to be a continuation?
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Thank you! Sometimes it's all in the planning. 
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Well I am willing to wait, one of the best stories/comics I have read since coming to DA...would love to see the conclusion one day
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Here is a sneak preview of the next page. I still need to add in the text, but it's mostly done. It's in my sta.sh so I believe you need to be signed in to DA in order to see it.
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Oops! I copied it but forgot to paste it in. Here you go: [link]
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thank you commented on image to avoid spoilers
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Thank you, Jerrie, I have the rest of the capture sequence (another 1 or 2 pages) already shot, I hope to finish it by the end of the week.
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SO Hot.. I CAN'T await the next parts 
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Thank you very much!
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Great start ! Why do we love to see close-ups of beautiful made-up eyes behind a mask slowly close as they are put to sleep! Please tell me!
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Thank you, glad you're enjoying it so far!
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There's always a place for new anesthetics, isn't there?
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You've gotta use the right tool for the job. Otherwise, I'd have to retitle the story "Tranquil: Scarlet Sentinel's Bish!"
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It is always a good thing to study your mark before you strike. Now that she has her I can't wait to see what happens next. Using NOX is an interesting choice and I am sure it will be interesting later since she knows who her captor is now. Awesome story Miss E can't wait for the next part!
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You look so lovely going down...loving this story so far, and you are def. coming over to play wearing this new costume
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Thanks Crimson! I hope to have the next page or two to finish the first chapter done soon!
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