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Published: 2017-12-15 16:56:55 +0000 UTC; Views: 838; Favourites: 34; Downloads: 1
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It started out with a sketch, how did it end up like this?It was only a sketch, IT WAS ONLY A FUCKING SKETCH!
Okay, but seriously... Why do I always do this to myself? I start sketching and before I know it, things turn into a 16 hour project.Β
( I left some details out on purpose (junkrats tea, rip tire and such) because it made the picture seem too cluttered.)
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Let me start by saying you did a phenomenalΒ job on this! There is so much attention to detail. This looks like something straight out of a comic. The detailing in anatomy, clothing, building structure, lighting, everything is keyed in to all the detailing. You didn't miss a single aspect.
That being said, there are a few things I would like to critique 
In terms of Junkrat, I think the shadows for his muscles are a little too dark/contrasting. I think it gives a little too much depth in this case, just in terms of his six pack. Also I believe his forehead is supposed to be slightly darker/burnt (not real familiar with OverWatch, just saw a few previews of him). I also think he looks like he is just floating (which I believe Roadhog is supposed to be grabbing him?). Making it obviously whether it is him jumping freely or if Roadhog is grabbing him (pulling his belt or having wrinkles on his pants to symbolize the pull on them) would help.
In terms of Roadhog, my only critique is that the right side bottom of his vest thing (our left) is slightly warped. It is not a consistent shape like it should be, even though it is swinging with him. I do not believe the perspective would change the shape too much on this, it just needs to be a consistent thickness.
The buildings are all on point, though some of the windows could use to be darker (I see you tried to make different consistencies of lighting, which you did a good job, but making some a darker grey or completely black to show some people are asleep would be perfect).
I am also unsure of what the reflective building is on the right side, though that again may be my lack of knowledge of OverWatch
Keep up the great work!Β
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Thank you so much! I've never put my backgrounds or perspective in my art before, and I'm starting to realize how much thats holding me back as an artist, so I really appreciate all the helpful critique! The reflection in the right building was suppose to be from part of the city that's in front of them, but it was really hard. 0x0. Haha. Any tips you may have would be greatly appreciated, and once again, thank you for the well thought out comment!
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Ok before I say anything your arts on another level compared to mine way better but I do have some thoughts, I love the biker pig dude, he's outfit is on point. I do feel like the money looks like its lacking a little movement. the guy on the left looks a little out of place to. I feel like maybe he deserves his own picture XD. his ribcage looks a little strange. There is also something behind pig biker that I cant identify .
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Before I say anything, your art is amazing, stop being so hard on yourself.
I think I'm starting to see what you're talking about, especially with Junkrat (the scrawny dude) being out of place, his shading isn't quiet right...
And I think you're talking about the clouds. XD I'm not very good with backgrounds haha
And if you're wondering, those 2 are junkrat and roadhog from a game called overwatch. A pic of them: www.google.com/search?biw=1360β¦ :
I left a few details of skinny dude out cause it made the picture feel too cluttered.Β
oxo Thank you though for the very helpful comment, I really appreciate it!
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Just got over watch XD
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Whoo! Welcome to the club!
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Riiiight? I absolutely love these two!
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Youβre welcome!
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This is absolutely amazing,I love the details you put on this piece but I think you could've drawn a variation of different buildings.
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Yeah, backgrounds aren't my strong suite, but practice makes perfect, right? Thank you for the kind feedback! <3
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Yeah,your right on that one!And your very welcome :3
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