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evil-dwarf — Breathing
Published: 2006-05-17 04:16:59 +0000 UTC; Views: 215; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 4
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Description She softly stirred
In her seat,
Politely poised,
And at peace
As I watched her read.
Her shoulders rise and fall
With the rhythm
Of each breath,
The comfort of a lullaby
Is received
As she sighs,
And suddenly, I realize...
How good it feels to breathe.
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Comments: 6

clearwater1291 [2006-07-12 02:44:55 +0000 UTC]

i love this... because you really don't think about breathing very much-you do it automatically. hmmm... nice work

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evil-dwarf In reply to clearwater1291 [2006-07-12 03:27:43 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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Jay-Bug [2006-05-17 04:19:44 +0000 UTC]

I never really know how to describe why I love your poetry so much. I think it's just because it flows so well, no words are wasted, and when you read it, you really feel it. I love it.

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evil-dwarf In reply to Jay-Bug [2006-05-17 04:25:09 +0000 UTC]

(Biggest Grin In The World) I always love getting comments from you, they are so kind and they make me feel like my poetry is appreciated. Which means alot to me, truly!! Thank you so much Jay!!

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evil-dwarf In reply to evil-dwarf [2006-05-17 04:38:33 +0000 UTC]

^_^....I hope so.

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Jay-Bug In reply to evil-dwarf [2006-05-17 04:26:20 +0000 UTC]

-^_^- Aww, well, don't think your comments don't give me the same feeling.

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