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Name: FatiliAge: 18
Gender:Female
Prehase: Fuck Off!
Like: Blood, Games, drawing, kill
Friends:Candy (Maybe?) Aliona Lawliet,
Blacky, Jess Lawliet, Melody, ProxyPreciousNanami,T.B,R.S,JuthePsycho
Love: Lukas ( 0KuSAAn )
Clothes: Black tie, black pants,bandage on arms, converse boots, Blue shirt, long black socks.
Special: cut (with seams) smile, two knifes,white skin.
Hoody Style/Clothes: fav.me/d6xrd6w
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Comments: 22
now I must agreeΒ
This isn't a marry sue. Β BUT If you must want to now what you might want to change would maybe be
Her friends, All cannon? Well how about we fix that! Come on dear. This is a goooooddd oc, how about she finds friends with other ocs!
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Yes I know this. Nicol say This to me and I do for she a boyfriend well don't worry she isn't a Oc x Cannon but I must fix her Desp. And I do her looong time ago nad I been a little stupid children XD I must deleate "cannon friends" :3
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Ah yes
you see the fandom is getting a tad overrun with all the mary sues. the Ships. Β the uuugghh stuff no one likes
where for me. Im just here...trying to help
SOOOO
Let's take her off, like don't make her with Jeff, may that be a crack ship?
eh?
Just giving out ideas
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You are a good person. You help a mary sues oc / cannon x oc ships ;w; this rly awsome from you. Yesh this is crack ship and I never from this time ship oc with cannon...
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eh, Im not that good, I just try to help others out. I mean I know how it feels to have a bad oc. For others to tell you, god it hurts and sucks. Β Noooowww, good!! Thats great!
What more can we do to make her even better?
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how about we work on her back story?
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Mmm...(Maybe I don't understand) well..Yes
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The story that made her what she is today?
Do you have that?
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Yes I have this on my profile maybe but this is write in polish.
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Now this is a killer OC that's original!!!!
HIGH FIVE!!!!
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You think she is orginal? NOT Mary sue?
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lolwut?
what i meant by that was she isn't completely original nor completely a Mary Sue either.
I don't know.....
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