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evilsherbear — TNM: Redux page 5
Published: 2010-04-12 00:26:17 +0000 UTC; Views: 5805; Favourites: 54; Downloads: 30
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Annnd that's the last of the uploads for now! A new skill comes with trial and error. I really enjoyed the drawing and layout, but the text and scanning part not so much.To learning!
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Thanks! I plan on updating the comic once a week.
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Wow! Great job on this. Art is fantastic (of course!) and so is the story leaving me wondering what'll happen next. Keep up the great work!! Love seeing comics from my fave TMNT fan artists on dA!
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^_^ This is getting really good. I can't wait for more! 
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haha, i love the side-view silhouette shots.
typos in panel 2 ("All" with 3 L's) and panel 3 ("the" spelled "thte").
i think my only critique of these pages is that i recommend a different font for the text... not that it's mandatory to use a "comic" font (NOT COMIC SANS! haha) but it really helps the flow of the comic. right now it looks so clinical or something. maybe try some hand-lettering?
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XD I wish Photoshop had spell check!
I just used Arial for the font. I'm a little ashamed because I KNOW there are better fonts out there, I just got lazy.
Handlettering is an option. For the next one, I might just put in all the text bubbles and text by hand.
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Wow, even though the scanning wasn't what you wanted it to be, you really did a great job on the pages, the inking is really well done, I look forward to more! ^^
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Thanks! I'm feeling better after having gotten it out there.
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Thanks! I try to make them as believeble as possible. Raph was just a pain to do. I can't get inside his head O_O
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funny I can't get inside Donnie's head and he's my favorite Turtle.
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Thanks! I think it adds drama
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yes! the pages we've all been eager to see 
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Yay learnins!! I love what you've got so far and look forward to more :3
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Thanks! I was getting a bit hard on myself about it, since it wasn't turning out the way I wanted it. I'm glad its not as bad as I imagine it
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