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She tried to ignore his gaze. The entire time she was making the tea, he had been watching her steadily, silently. He only broke his gaze to sip his tea, or glance at his katanas by his side.It was still hard to believe that this was all happening. That this was REAL.
Venus and her father had hoped that coming to Japan would be a good way to start over, to turn their luck around. It hadn't. Their last hope at survival depended on her marrying into a good family, or at least ones with connections, like the Hamatos. Their fathers had left to discuss the matter further in private, leaving the two of them alone.
It wasn’t the prospect of marriage that bothered her, as she always knew that her father would pick her groom. No, what bothered her was to whom. A family of shinobi- ASSASSINS, spies. It made her shudder to think about it. Venus had wanted to use her knowledge for good- for healing, now it would most likely be used for poisons and aid in their covert missions.
Would she be married to this young man or one of his brothers? What was his name? Something English, foreign to even this land . .. Leon? She had been in such a daze that she hadn’t really been paying attention. She gave a sidelong glance at the young man next to her. How many had he killed?
He met her gaze. “The tea is very good,” he said.
“Thank you,” she replied, and returned back to her thoughts. What would the future hold for her?
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Trying something different, random little one shot fic AU with picture. A little rusty at writing . . .
I'm always looking to improve, so any critiques are welcome, as long as they're civil and constructive.
Leo, Venus © Mirage.
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Comments: 53
bugsytrex [2017-11-29 22:37:49 +0000 UTC]
I think Venus gets a bad rap. I think folks "disliked" her not cause she was a girl turtle so much, but because of how she was written in the show. If she was written more like you just did with this pic, sooo much better! Anyway, all that to say, I never had a real issue with Venus and I absolutely LOVE what you did with the pic and the short fic! Bravo!
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evilsherbear In reply to Rasheedzee [2012-02-20 19:22:23 +0000 UTC]
There isn't one! It's just a short drabble I had in my head
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evilsherbear In reply to reader1 [2011-11-13 19:09:00 +0000 UTC]
I probably won't. These were just a series of drabbles I did for fun.
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Tluaengiad [2010-05-22 23:38:37 +0000 UTC]
Too bad you have a short attention span (you said it, not me ^_^ cause you are really good at packing a lot of story into a few paragraphs.
I'd love to see what you'd do with a few chapters. ^_^
Awesome illistration by the way. You can tell what they're feeling and thinking without the story (which just makes it an even cooler bonus in my book)
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PrayerGirl1 [2009-11-11 22:06:51 +0000 UTC]
WOW! This is really good! You should write more!!!!!!! Thank you for writing this! It is just soooo awsome!!!!!
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PrayerGirl1 In reply to evilsherbear [2009-11-11 22:26:50 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome, my dear!
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edogori [2009-07-09 07:42:02 +0000 UTC]
wow Oo hey this is mean >< you know that?
writing such a good story and leave us alone with out an end T.T
But the picture is very well done
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evilsherbear In reply to edogori [2009-07-09 16:48:47 +0000 UTC]
It means I'm going to finish the story! This is just a teaser page.
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edogori In reply to evilsherbear [2009-07-09 17:26:40 +0000 UTC]
great
where and when you are going to finish the story please tell me T^T
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evilsherbear In reply to edogori [2009-07-09 18:10:57 +0000 UTC]
I'm going to start working on it more regularly, hopefully a page a week.
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edogori In reply to evilsherbear [2009-07-09 18:16:26 +0000 UTC]
would be great I will wait on my chair XD
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Animebitch [2008-10-20 02:20:38 +0000 UTC]
i hope you make a fanfic on this! it sounds so cute and cool! and i this pic is great! i love how they are in kimonos and they look good too!
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evilsherbear In reply to Animebitch [2008-10-20 15:09:32 +0000 UTC]
I've had other ideas for this fanfic, but I'm still working on my other comic right now XD Want to do both, but I've already settled for the other one.
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Animebitch In reply to evilsherbear [2008-10-20 22:50:02 +0000 UTC]
awww well if you do start working on this fanfic i can't wait to read it ^_^
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copperlupus [2008-08-28 00:44:57 +0000 UTC]
hay just wanted to know do you have the rest of this story and if so, where i can find more?
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evilsherbear In reply to copperlupus [2008-08-28 04:58:45 +0000 UTC]
This was a one shot. I may come back to it someday, but really I don't know how I'd continue it
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captain-wedgie [2008-06-09 19:44:38 +0000 UTC]
i really like how this picture came out. I especially like the accompanying story. It makes for quite the awkward situation.
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Milykins [2008-05-02 02:57:43 +0000 UTC]
Hmm..., I like the little story to go with the pic, ^^ this would make a pretty interesting fic that I would probably read,
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evilsherbear In reply to Milykins [2008-05-02 04:47:27 +0000 UTC]
Thanks! I think I might do another one in this vein, maybe
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SwedenGirl In reply to evilsherbear [2008-04-30 08:26:08 +0000 UTC]
You welcome.
But give color to all your pic. Plz
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evilsherbear In reply to SwedenGirl [2008-04-30 15:32:10 +0000 UTC]
I'd love to, but it takes a LOT of time ^^
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evilsherbear In reply to SwedenGirl [2008-04-30 17:34:43 +0000 UTC]
About 2-3 hours for color, not including inking.
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mortinfamiART [2008-04-29 12:23:12 +0000 UTC]
wwwow, the colored version is amazing!!!
you used the brushes (or textures :s) very very well! are perfect
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evilsherbear In reply to mortinfamiART [2008-04-29 15:00:44 +0000 UTC]
Thanks! It took awhile to get all the textures to look right.
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Topsukka [2008-04-29 11:29:29 +0000 UTC]
Well, I like the picture, and story sounds better than NMs.
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Rookie-101 [2008-04-29 02:12:37 +0000 UTC]
Your TMNT work never cease to amaze me! The color and texture in here is so awesome and well done ^^ The little story behind this in your commentary is great!
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LunarLotis [2008-04-29 02:00:54 +0000 UTC]
O I love this story and the pic you should write a bigger FanFic.
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evilsherbear In reply to LunarLotis [2008-04-29 04:30:26 +0000 UTC]
Thanks!
I probably won't, as I've got a horrible attention span. One shots are probably all I can do XD
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Magzdilla [2008-04-29 01:49:53 +0000 UTC]
Holy crap, I remember the show with Venus... At the time I totally HATED her, thinking it was a cheap, pandering way to get a girl into the show. But now, with this picture and this story, I suddenly find myself loving her.
Nicely done!
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