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Portfolio work for Swedish model Fevil.Digital manipulations: Tomas Andersson
Model: Fevil (Sweden)
Model Photographer: Elin Westerberg (Sweden)
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Comments: 5
LawrenceDeDark [2006-11-10 07:06:24 +0000 UTC]
I really like the blood on her face and the textures in the background look good. The only problem is the two seem a bit disconnected.
I think it might help if there was a faint grain or texture applied to the entire piece to pull it all together.
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Evolution169 In reply to LawrenceDeDark [2006-11-11 13:27:40 +0000 UTC]
Do you mean that she "stand out" from the background? If that's what you meant it's how I wanted it. I wanted the fingers to go into the background while she should be outside the background with the body and face. Also the "cyber arm" should be a part of her, not the background. I had to hide her breast because of the censor for her portfolio.
But maybe that wasn't what you meant
Anyway I'm thankful for your critics.
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LawrenceDeDark In reply to Evolution169 [2006-11-11 18:25:32 +0000 UTC]
Yes, that is what I meant ... but you should stay with your vision. Mine is just one perspective. Some of the people that mentored me so to speak, believe that at least one texture should be applied across the entire piece to tie it all together. Though this texture can be of a lighter opacity than the more predominate textures in a piece.
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Evolution169 In reply to LawrenceDeDark [2006-11-12 17:07:08 +0000 UTC]
Thanks for your words Lawrence. You know I always appreciate a honest thought about my work and I feel I know exactly what you're talking about. But for this piece of art I feel another texture would kill the vision for how I wanted this image to look.
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