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Published: 2012-05-13 12:14:04 +0000 UTC; Views: 674; Favourites: 51; Downloads: 5
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I added some crappy colours.Related content
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Nice animation, you many want to work a little more on the legs though. For example, maybe add a little shadowing if you can, and maybe make them a tad longer. I don't really know, but I'm sure with practice, you'll be amazing!! C:
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Yeah! Thank you for the response! Well About the legs, hehe they were the hardest part actually, and they really didn't come out as I wanted, uhm the pose is suppose to look like he's tripping a bit forward, that's why his legs can't be longer than his arms, One thing though, I think it's the upper part of the body and arms are a bit to big and long, that's why his legs look smaller than they are.
This was my second animation, and I didn't want to spend that much time with it, but I'll think about what you said about the legs, and colouring! thank you very much and glad that you like it dear <3
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No problem! Yeah, they're the main part!!
That could be it as well, but I would have to look at a running guy to really say anything. Not implying that you haven't done this already, but you should really observe other professional running animations and try that.
Also, maybe you could try him running from different angles? Not sure. ID
No problem!! It's great for your second one, and I know you'll get really good at it. ^u^
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c:> Thank you, I really appreciate it! I like that you tell me tips about stuff! It really helps me a lot!
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OOOh, I can't wait to see more!! cotton candy kiss
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X3 that's so awesome! 8D the coloured version is looking really awesome!
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Oh thank you very much! I'm glad that you like it! :>
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Like the last commenter, I really like the way the sword is animated, and how it tilts!
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omg i'm so slow with comments 
And thank you! That was not even the hard part! But I'm glad that people like how it turned out!
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You should probably name it "Dave animation" or "Dave running" so that other people understand that it's moving! 
This is really great sis! I was really surprised to see that you can animate so well! 
Even the sword tilting looks great! I've always found it difficult when drawing stuff, especially pointing things like swords and weapons, from different angles, 
I bet you'd make a great animator! Perhaps another career choice to think about!
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ah yeah! I know, but it sounds so clichΓ© or somethin' 
And thank you! I actually didn't spent that much time on the sword, tat was one of the easiest parts. The legs though, took me a hell of time. x3 But I mean everyone has their own difficulties!
<3 Thank you for the response dear!
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