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Published: 2005-06-27 03:52:29 +0000 UTC; Views: 237; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 9
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Description Her foot arched and I could see the dark hairs of her biggest toe on end. My eyes traveled up her stubbled leg, over her protruding underbelly to her nonexistent breasts to, finally, a face only a mother could love. This woman, I dare say, proclaimed herself to be a 'friend' of mine. One of which that, really was no 'friend' of mine at all.

Her bulbous lips were moving again and so I smiled and nodded. Looking off into the abyss that was one of my many daydreams, I ignored her. The daydream was clear and simple compared to my countless complex thoughts of destruction of the body before me. The one of simplicity crossing my vision of the moment required the prop of a knife. Very classic of the many homicides throughout history, and so I dismissed the daydream as quickly as it came, filing it away under-Simple.

My vision slowly came into focus on the nonexistant breasts of the one who called herself 'friend of mine'. I sighed lightly and shifted my vision to her face. Though as piggish as she was, she seemed to be no dumb animal with a look of thoughts running through her cranium.

She considered herself high standard. A genius among many dull fops indeed. A mindfull treasure, though her works were too detailed and bored me.

I thought mine were too little detailed, yet proved to be worth the small read that they were. I reguarded myself as a 'highly detailed blunt' writer, which simply meant-adequate detail for a quick read.

She had much higher grades in the small high school that we attended. I learned early that one would get praised for their labors in school work and slacked for fear of such praise. This praise that this one beside me fed off of sickened me. She adored it as much as I disliked it.

Although, like many others this one had faults.(1)

Her fault lie with those of other gossips in the small town in which we lived. This infuriated me to no end, thus thoughts of friendship evolved to something more.

She sat beside me in a mini-skirt and a tight spandex shirt that rode up to reveal what horrors lay beneath. Her feet were shoed with thonged sandles, which made me wrinkle my nose in disapproval as the revealing shoes proved that she had more rolls of fat on display. Her eyes were downcast, moving over the concreate beneath which we sat.

Those horrid colored eyes, leading one to think her a smart, sweet person. I frowned and previous thoughts were brought to the front of mind. I knew her for what she was now, something that I had never run into in life before.

Anyone from the city should now know that not all country folk are simple minded(2); as this one who had the southern drawl perfected from infancy surely broke the cliche.

Irritation quickly grew into hatred for the one sitting beside me. From the start of our friendship we had had little tiffs, but those were overlooked until the truth came about.

"You know, I've always wondered what was in the woods behind the school."

"Really? Me too!"

"Do you want to come with me to . . . explore?"

She smiled at me, "Sure."

I walked quietly beside the one who stomped her way about the sparatic grass and the rocks that littered the field behind the small southern high school.

A devious smile spread accross my face as I spotted debris around the outskirts of the heavilly wooded backround. My gaze shifted over each piece of garbage, reguarding it for its use.

"Oh, wow," I heard her murmmer as her hand carressed the worn fabric of a used sofa. Something coursed through my veins at that moment, and suddenly my eyes caught sight of a large blunt metal object.

I strode over to the object and weighed it in my hand. I smiled playfully and picked up an empty coke can, hitting the coke can like a bat would hit a baseball.

The can soared in the air before making its desent to hit a rock with a sound 'ping'. She watched my antics while I hit various objects with the blunt metal object, often giggling like a school-girl would. I smiled as she giggled and sidled up next to her. I bent to pick up an empty soup can beside her thonged foot, rising to hit the can soundly in the directon of the other objects that I had hit. While her eyes followed the soup can, my eyes followed the thick rusted metal bat-like object as it collided with her skull.

~Fin

(1)-besides the fact that she is ugly beyond compare.
(2)-from my experiences living in a city, no one cared about eachother much and were prone to ignore rather than take notice. In a country setting, everything is noticed and blown up to extreme measures, and gossip runs rampent whether it's true or not.
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Comments: 18

Thanatos454 [2005-06-30 18:57:35 +0000 UTC]

I love the ending. It left off at the perfect moment for my imagination to fill in the rest. God I hate small conservative towns...

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ExampleOne In reply to Thanatos454 [2005-07-01 03:04:08 +0000 UTC]

Haha, me too, me too.

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maxbloom [2005-06-28 13:12:23 +0000 UTC]

I like it. I'd like to see you write it so that the end feels more like a twist.

Why do you think you hate her ugliness so much? I myself find that when I hate someone intensely it's because something in that person reminds me of what I hate about myself.

... but other times that other person is just, you know, annoying.

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ExampleOne In reply to maxbloom [2005-06-29 03:44:27 +0000 UTC]

Well, this female and I were friends since fifth grade, we had had little tiffs here and there, but it wasn't until high school that she started to spread vicious lies about me.
(1) That I had had incestuous sexual relations with my younger brother.
(2 & 3) That I was lesbian with her and one of my other friends.
(4) That I stank. (Even though I took a thirty minute shower every morning before school.)
(5) That after I heard about all of this, I discontinued the friendship, then she said that I was jealous that she had a boyfriend and that I was jealous of her boyfriend because of the fact that I had a lesbian crush on her and got mad EVERY time she got serious with a boy.
Anyway...I have a very legitimate(sp?) reason to hate her, and I portrayed her as she really is. Every description of her is absolutely true, though I'm sure I could have made it MUCH worse by adding the fact that her teeth were in horrible shape and the back teeth were so bad they had to be pulled. Her front teeth weren't much better and had a film of grim that seemingly couldn't be taken off not even by the best dentist in the United States. Her fingernails were long and sharp and tinted yellow from the essessive amount of polish she always painted on them.
The list goes on and on, only things a person who gets close to another notices.

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maxbloom In reply to ExampleOne [2005-06-29 06:41:26 +0000 UTC]

Yeah okay. The girl sounds like she needed a swift club to the head.

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ExampleOne In reply to maxbloom [2005-06-29 06:49:49 +0000 UTC]

-_- sorry i dragged that out...now I probably am annoying...

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maxbloom In reply to ExampleOne [2005-06-29 06:58:48 +0000 UTC]

Nah... you're cute.

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ExampleOne In reply to maxbloom [2005-06-29 07:59:09 +0000 UTC]

dunno about -cute-....

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maxbloom In reply to ExampleOne [2005-06-29 13:56:09 +0000 UTC]

Well.... cute in a dark, psychotic-nypho, outsider kind of way.

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ExampleOne In reply to maxbloom [2005-06-30 03:46:37 +0000 UTC]

Ohh, thank you!

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ExampleOne In reply to ExampleOne [2005-06-29 03:49:38 +0000 UTC]

What made it even worse was the fact that everyone believed her, and in a town that the local hangout is a church function, they dont take things such as incest and lesbianism lightly.

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TheDude5114 [2005-06-27 10:46:20 +0000 UTC]

lol sounds like something iv wanted to do to some people i know.

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ExampleOne In reply to TheDude5114 [2005-06-27 15:48:37 +0000 UTC]

lmao! Aa, me too me too..as you can tell..I thought about it a lot. I hope I described her well enough that everyone hates her.

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TheDude5114 In reply to ExampleOne [2005-06-27 18:48:13 +0000 UTC]

ya she sounds really disgusting

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ExampleOne In reply to TheDude5114 [2005-06-28 03:07:30 +0000 UTC]

At least you didn't get to meet her in real life ....-_-

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TheDude5114 In reply to ExampleOne [2005-06-28 04:10:40 +0000 UTC]

lol iv meet some like her...

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ExampleOne In reply to TheDude5114 [2005-06-28 06:16:36 +0000 UTC]

>_< ack, i wish that sight on no one!

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TheDude5114 In reply to ExampleOne [2005-06-28 06:46:43 +0000 UTC]

lol

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