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Exlanzer — Invitation by-nc-nd

Published: 2007-05-08 06:46:10 +0000 UTC; Views: 2464; Favourites: 9; Downloads: 74
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Description *Submission for B&W Comic contest sponsored by

[link]


List of material:
-A piece of paper^^
- Ruler
-Mechanical Pencil 2B 0.5
-Scanner (not mine)
-PC

Type Font Used:
For Credit - FederationDS9Title, Sand, Old English Five
For Dialogue - DigitalStrip & Anime Ace 2.0 BB (thanks to Blambot.com)

Software used: Manga Studio & Adobe Photoshop CS2

File format: PNG-8

Update:
-See by yourself^^

*Note:
-To be honest, this is my first experience creating manga page.
-The title, storyline & characters (their names too!) for this manga are not completed yet. ("Invitation" is just a title for this page only)
-I'm doing this by myself (...I would be happy if somebody help me doing this.)
-Drawing background & outfits is my weak points. (see by yourself ^__^v)
-No graphic tablet used. (I don't have enough money T_T)

Please report any mistakes/error on this manga page.
Advise/suggestions/critiques is much appreciated.
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Comments: 80

Exlanzer In reply to ??? [2007-12-08 10:57:43 +0000 UTC]

wags, makasih sensei

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W1zemakerS [2007-09-22 06:15:44 +0000 UTC]

TOP BGT!!!!

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KuyaChan [2007-09-18 04:15:48 +0000 UTC]

wah keren kk komiknya, sayang ko ga diterbitin

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Exlanzer In reply to KuyaChan [2007-09-19 08:58:53 +0000 UTC]

makasih

Masih latihan nie, moga2 aj suatu saat bisa kuterusin^^

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keroArt [2007-07-29 04:54:06 +0000 UTC]

wow.. nice bro..
tapi kok rasanya sepatu cewenya kegedean yah? hehe

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Exlanzer In reply to keroArt [2007-07-29 06:19:02 +0000 UTC]

Sepatunya gede biar ntar kalo si co' nakal, nendangnya biar mantaph

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QuantumSpectre [2007-06-11 19:09:07 +0000 UTC]

HEY!!!!! I really like the hair and how you used black. Yep, the background is a bit bland; however, you have a pretty good layout, an especially to say you've never done this before. The outfits aren't that bad either. This is very nice. You're too hard on yourself. Geez, I'm glad I didn't enter the black and white part of the contest, you might've beat me, lol. You are a pretty good artist to have so few pageviews. Keep up the good work

So you say you used Manga Studio. I have never heard of that before. Perhaps I should check it out. Can I download it for free?

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Exlanzer In reply to QuantumSpectre [2007-06-12 05:25:03 +0000 UTC]

Whew, thank you so much I'll try harder!^^

The software is not mine, I just borrowed it from my friend^^

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QuantumSpectre In reply to Exlanzer [2007-06-12 18:24:24 +0000 UTC]

You should come check out my entry

SEE!!! ==> [link]

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yufu [2007-06-07 07:28:17 +0000 UTC]

ngomong2 gbtangue kira2 tinggi badannya segituan juga tuh

jd buat g gak gitu masalah(semua tergantung ceritanya)

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Exlanzer In reply to yufu [2007-06-08 13:43:35 +0000 UTC]

Oh! ... gbtanku dulu juga segituan tingginya^^, maklum lah ... gw suka yg imut2 mungil geto^^

... u bener juga sich, cerita adalah yg utama (walaupun gw lebih mementingkan gambar chara-nya , maklum lah, gw paling susah kalo disuruh bikin cerita ... idenya suka berubah2^^)

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serpentwitch [2007-06-07 05:31:14 +0000 UTC]

Marvelous. Top abis. Gw demen style gambar mukanya, cmn itu cewe kl dibandingin ama cowo itu beda jauh bgt tingginya ?? ><. Udah itu dibalik rok mini pake celana panjang gt, plong in aja hehe ganti stocking ajah.. *sluurp*

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Exlanzer In reply to serpentwitch [2007-06-10 04:33:46 +0000 UTC]

Tuh, celananya udah kuganti ... PUAS? PUAS?

*Keliatannya masih ada detil yg ketinggalan ... tapi biarlah ...

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serpentwitch In reply to Exlanzer [2007-06-10 08:05:43 +0000 UTC]

Belom puas, mas tukul. Kasi batasan stocking di paha. jd diatas stocking adalh kulit putih mulus xixixixi...

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Exlanzer In reply to serpentwitch [2007-06-11 04:15:15 +0000 UTC]

Agh!! Lupa!! I'll finish it A.S.A.P.!!

*Kembali ke ... komputer (ga punya laptop )

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Exlanzer In reply to serpentwitch [2007-06-07 05:50:34 +0000 UTC]

Waduh .... ini kommen yg kutunggu2 ... si chara cewek sedang kurombak ulang (tinggi badannya ntar juga kutinggiin^^) ... udah nemu model yg tepat - tinggal nggambar aja koq^^, just wait

*Sip ... ntar celananya kuganti stocking, hehe (kk-q dirumah juga bilang hal yg sama)

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serpentwitch In reply to Exlanzer [2007-06-07 06:01:39 +0000 UTC]

pasnya sih cewe kira2 satu kepala lebih rendah dr cowo kl menurut gw. nemu model yg tepat? Ada cewe aslinya maksudnya ? hehe *ngiler*

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Exlanzer In reply to serpentwitch [2007-06-08 13:34:46 +0000 UTC]

Modelnya?? Hehehe ... model ceweknya tuh pemeran adiknya Light Yagami (death note live), inisialnya H *Oops SPOILER^^

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serpentwitch In reply to Exlanzer [2007-06-09 02:33:55 +0000 UTC]

Ooooh...itu toh...kl dr gbr ce lo yg sekarang lbh mirip Death note yg manganya tuh.

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Exlanzer In reply to serpentwitch [2007-06-09 06:32:53 +0000 UTC]

uhehe, gambar cewek gw maunya imut mulu sich^^ ... kalo gambar cowoknya gimana tuh?

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serpentwitch In reply to Exlanzer [2007-06-09 07:26:50 +0000 UTC]

Kl cowonya sih dah pas, mirip gw huehehheeh.... XD

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Exlanzer In reply to serpentwitch [2007-06-09 07:46:28 +0000 UTC]

Hoho, model cowoknya aq loh^^
*Masak kamu mirip aq

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yufu [2007-06-07 05:24:15 +0000 UTC]

secara tonning udah bagus banget

permainan negatif sama positif space nya udah bagus(jd cukup balance)
ekspresi kharakternya kelitan bgt itu udah bagus bgt jd secara emosional gak flat

untuk kolom sama angel nantidulu g musti liat komik lo yg laen
saran secara pribadi gua suka kalo ada permainan anglenya

ini saran klo llo d bli tablet
untuk tonning dan ingking udah oke tp g ada rekomen supaya lo irit duit , pake program manga studio aja

komiknya diterbitin yah gua tunggua

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Exlanzer In reply to yufu [2007-06-07 05:52:30 +0000 UTC]

Oh iya ... gw udah make Manga Studio koq, tapi repot banget kalo cuma make mouse T_T

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yufu In reply to Exlanzer [2007-06-07 07:26:42 +0000 UTC]

pakae wacon graphier aja aji munpung harga brg komputer lg turun

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Exlanzer In reply to yufu [2007-06-09 07:40:29 +0000 UTC]

kira2 harganya brapa??

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yufu In reply to Exlanzer [2007-06-10 09:35:48 +0000 UTC]

900rb-1jt an

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Exlanzer In reply to yufu [2007-06-07 05:46:36 +0000 UTC]

Thanks buat kommen-nya!! *Motivasi baru buat bikin halaman berikutnya^^

*Moga2 komik gw kelar suatu saat, amien

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resuki [2007-05-31 03:25:19 +0000 UTC]

Nice layout. I like the way their hair is drawn.

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Exlanzer In reply to resuki [2007-06-07 04:53:52 +0000 UTC]

Thanks.

*Drawing hair is my favorite (male only, for female it's quite hard and annoying T_T)

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resuki In reply to Exlanzer [2007-06-07 18:29:54 +0000 UTC]

Well I like the style you use here. Very awesome.

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samegiri [2007-05-23 14:35:12 +0000 UTC]

Kul2! Ceweknya kok ky Kyoko di Black Cat? apa emang terinspirasi dr sono

Manga Studio donlod dmana?

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Exlanzer In reply to samegiri [2007-05-24 05:15:47 +0000 UTC]

Aghh!! My brother & bberapa temenku juga ngomong gitu XD ... yep, emang terinspirasi dari sono^^, tapi itu masih prototype koq, tuh chara ce' lagi kurombak ulang
Terus terang aja, aq ini paling gak bisa nggambar ce'

... Manga Studio ... aq dipinjemin temen.

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samegiri In reply to Exlanzer [2007-05-24 09:10:57 +0000 UTC]

Huahuahahah gw jg kurang bagus klo gambar cewe, pdhl dulu sukanya gmbr cewe drpd cowok

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rithgroove [2007-05-16 14:21:18 +0000 UTC]

nice comic ^^
keren bro...
btw ini proyek komik lo?

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Exlanzer In reply to rithgroove [2007-05-17 06:19:20 +0000 UTC]

Proyek komik?^^

Bukann, ini cuma isenk (kalo ada yg mao bantuin boleh dhe jadi proyek ^__^)

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rithgroove In reply to Exlanzer [2007-05-17 08:18:00 +0000 UTC]

post di forumku aja...
siapa tau banyak yang mao join.
[link]

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trygothic [2007-05-16 13:06:30 +0000 UTC]

keren gambarnya, tapi kelanjutannya gimana nih

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Exlanzer In reply to trygothic [2007-05-16 13:35:28 +0000 UTC]

... hehe, ceritanya blom kelar2 ... nama para character-nya juga sama nasibnya X__X

Sebenernya, ini cuma halaman komik percobaan koq, buat ngetes aku mampu bikin komik pa nggak ...

*Blom tau mao kulanjutin pa ga, kalo banyak yg mendukung (membantu apa lagi^^) gw lanjutin deh komiknya.
**Juga bingung misalnya udah jadi mau diapain, dikirim ke penerbit juga ... aq pesimis

(waiting for more support ...)

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trygothic In reply to Exlanzer [2007-05-17 18:51:59 +0000 UTC]

heheh...nggak perlu deh pesimis....yang penting pede wae...toh klo belum sampean jalani kan sampean nggak tahu

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Exlanzer In reply to trygothic [2007-06-09 07:38:59 +0000 UTC]

hehe, nasehat loe persis kaya nasehat orang2 disekitar gw^^, sama2 Jogja getu loh

BTW thx buat kommennya^^

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trygothic In reply to Exlanzer [2007-06-10 12:16:01 +0000 UTC]

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zamboze [2007-05-11 03:50:18 +0000 UTC]

GILAAA!!!
KEREN!!!!!!

lg bikin project comic???
sendiri ato team??...kayaknya team yah...

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Exlanzer In reply to zamboze [2007-05-11 06:53:49 +0000 UTC]

Project comic ... masih angin-anginan ... ceritanya aja aq masih bingung^^, nama buat tokoh2nya aja blom kelar2 ... capek dhee ^__^v

Ini kerjaanku sendirian ... (mulai dari sketch ampe selese ...)

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zamboze In reply to Exlanzer [2007-05-12 01:43:45 +0000 UTC]

gileee gak capee tuh??

btw loe kuliah khan?? dimana??? n ambil jurusan ape??

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Exlanzer In reply to zamboze [2007-05-12 03:20:20 +0000 UTC]

Gak capee koq ... kalo BeTE sering terjadi

Yep, gw kuliah, di AMIKOM, jurusan TI S1

loe ndiri yo kuliah kan? di jakarta??

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zamboze In reply to Exlanzer [2007-05-14 01:38:53 +0000 UTC]

jurusan TI????!!!!!
SAMA DUNKS!!!!!!
wa juga TI di Indonusa Esa Unggul!!
semester 4!!
loe semester berapa??
oia AMIKOM tuh Daerah mana sih??? maklum wa katro^^

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Exlanzer In reply to zamboze [2007-05-14 03:44:56 +0000 UTC]

Udah semester 4 toh, wah jauh^^, gw masih semester 1 tapi mao ngulang ^^', krn ada masalah dikit ^__^v

STMIK Amikom tuh daerah Condongcatur ...
loe pernah ke Jogja??

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zamboze In reply to Exlanzer [2007-05-16 02:38:07 +0000 UTC]

wah blom pernah...^^ hahahahaha!!!!

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rithgroove In reply to zamboze [2007-05-16 14:22:32 +0000 UTC]

weleh2 ada 3 programmer nganggur neh >.<
yuk bikin game

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