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Published: 2004-11-12 10:31:11 +0000 UTC; Views: 61; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 6
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I know my words let you downI simply cannot think around you
Sad songs I am listening to
At 3am I am still imagining our future meeting scenrios and
I cannot resist wondering about your future lovers
although you adamentely insist upon your celibacy
they will be undeniably lower in presence than you
my dear (your beauty has always been under-appreciated)
they will be chubby, to keep up the appearance that you do not
care for looks (you were always so disgusted by my bones, or so
you say)
I debate the sex I have had since you and realize no one can replace you
but I will try my best to pretend someone will and
you will settle beneath you
and the sex I know will be bad
dispite my cruel images of youΒ Β having the best sex
that two people can possibly have
(you will finally achieve hour status and
she will not once wonder what she is missing on Tv)
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Comments: 13
Exploding-kitty [2004-11-20 03:11:50 +0000 UTC]
yes, the past lover comes back to haunt my ass all the time, thanks for you support!
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poeticsighs [2004-11-20 01:25:20 +0000 UTC]
you seem to keep dwelling on a past lover. i love how your poems keep going back to that. you sound like me..i can totally relate to this...even the pain in love is beautiful..*sigh*
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Exploding-kitty In reply to Blazor-rade [2004-11-13 04:22:35 +0000 UTC]
did you fav it?
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le-kisse [2004-11-12 18:33:13 +0000 UTC]
~*trembling artistic pleasure*~
...and I love the picture above...
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Exploding-kitty In reply to le-kisse [2004-11-12 19:49:34 +0000 UTC]
thank you so much!
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xdennisxcootsx [2004-11-12 13:42:24 +0000 UTC]
what a poem. i like it a lot. it def. hit home.
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Exploding-kitty In reply to xdennisxcootsx [2004-11-12 17:14:19 +0000 UTC]
I'm happy you can relate, I'm always worried people wont be able to understand what I'm writing about, and secretly saying "what is the crazy lady rambling about?" So thanks!
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xdennisxcootsx In reply to Exploding-kitty [2004-11-13 03:39:53 +0000 UTC]
no problem. thank you!
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Bionic4Pc [2004-11-12 10:33:44 +0000 UTC]
Very interesting. Although cannot completely relate to the poem, it will most likely strike a cord with many readers as they may have found themselves in that situation. Wonderful job!
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Exploding-kitty In reply to Bionic4Pc [2004-11-12 10:34:08 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much!
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Bionic4Pc In reply to Exploding-kitty [2004-11-12 10:37:29 +0000 UTC]
It was my pleasure. Keep up the good work.
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